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Reviews for The Lion and the Serpent

By : emilywaters
  • From Dezra on March 01, 2008
    Great! I ruined my mascara by crying. lol That was a very moving chapter. I am afraid of how Draco will handle it if Harry doesn't make it. I hope he does.
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  • From Diane on February 29, 2008
    That is a much better way for Harry to die. If nothing else can be done, at least Draco was able to do that much. I'm still holding out for a happy ending though. I also have my ideas about what happened to Harry. Wow you update fast.
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  • From Leentjef on February 29, 2008
    wow this was very very good
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From hpn827 on February 29, 2008
    Thank you.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 29, 2008
    I sooo hope he's right!!! I sooo need chapter 38!!!!
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  • From QueenB on February 29, 2008
    Ch. 36 This is a bold but crazy plan. Harry has shown quite a bit of the martyr in this story. As Draco noted, he has stripped himself of everything holding himself to the world. The Slytherin will have to perform a true miracle to retrieve Harry's fleeing spirit.
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  • From Leentjef on February 29, 2008
    very good chapter
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 28, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 37! Can Harry bring back Draco? Can Draco save Harry? I sooo need more!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 28, 2008
    This is nuts...the ideas you're coming up with...is Draco going to meet Harry at King's Cross? Or can Harry even go to King's Cross? where in the world will they wind up....Draco's plan is insane...I hope Hermione comes through. The idea of Harry being in eternal darkness for the fate of the rest of the world is so Harry, and do hope you can bring him back, but at the very least bring him out of the dark so he can die in the light where he belongs...great chapter.
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  • From Diane on February 28, 2008
    Ahhhh! Why did I have to start reading this now? Gah, I'm going to die from the cliffhanger. Egads. I do love/hate what you did with Harry. I hate seeing him so broken, but it's stupid to believe that he'd be unaffected by all the events in his life. I wish I'd been around sooner to help you with those chapters you weren't too fond of, but at the same time, I wish I was just a little later to the party.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 28, 2008
    OH. MY. GOD. I missed an update...so I'm two chapters behind...reviewing "Fury" in this post. Incredible tension...I didn't see that coming at all, although now that Draco is going crazy with the Mark calling him, it seems so obvious that that would have happened. Hermione knew it was coming and didn't warn him, which makes me think that there's something else that may occur (something good) if he can get through it. Great tension building there with Draco being focused on getting to his Master and throwing his body against the shield and at the others. I like that you're really paying attention to details and canon in terms of the use of portkeys, apparation, as well as creating magic of your own. This is excellent...can't wait to see what happens in the recovery chapter..OK, off now to read it : )
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  • From Leentjef on February 28, 2008
    wow very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 28, 2008
    He just has to survive until the poison takes hold. I sooo need chapter 36!!!
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  • From Nikte on February 28, 2008
    Again speechless, but loving every word of the chapter!!!!!!!!! Your story is really awesome. xoxo
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  • From Nikte on February 28, 2008
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I so need next chapter, this one left me speechless, but I
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