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Reviews for The Lion and the Serpent

By : emilywaters
  • From thrnbrooke on February 21, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 29!!!
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  • From Omnni on February 21, 2008
    Poor Draco. Love it. Hope there will be more soon.
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  • From Nikte on February 21, 2008
    I WAS RIGHT ABOUT THE WAY HARRY PLANS TO END WITH VOLDEMORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I
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  • From Leentjef on February 21, 2008
    very very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 20, 2008
    Awww...no matter how dark Harry becomes, he's still Harry. I knew he didn't put the condition of death on Draco if the bond was broken. I hope Harry doesn't have to die, please make this a happy ending...a happy in slavery ending for Draco : ) Maybe Calixa can somehow die instead? Not that that would do any good I suppose..lol. Please don't wait too long to update, I can't wait to see how they are gonna get out of this...if that's what you have planned..
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 20, 2008
    Oh man, two new chapters...I was wondering when you were going to update! I'll review them one by one. i don't think that "The Others" is too dialogue driven...you got to the point. That's why I'm frankly enjoying this story. It really packs a punch without a lot of bullshit : ) I like prose as much as the next person, but you're really talented at not using too much.

    Anyway, this new development is quite interesting with the Slytherin kids he hates so much and has been unfair to actually absorbing his protection. The irony is great, especially when we know that Harry was supposed to be in Slytherin anyway : ) I LOVED how he referred to Draco as his partner and not his slave, even though we both know that Draco loves being one to him....still want to smack Calixa down, but maybe now the bitch will see the light once Harry explains things...speaking of which, where the hell are you going with Harry wanting to be Voldemort? I'm assuming he wants to replace him as a Dark Lord but a good Dark Lord? whatever that could possibly mean...another good chapter : )
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  • From Leentjef on February 20, 2008
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Nikte on February 19, 2008
    Hi, as always, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! And I liked this chapter even if you didn
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  • From potterlover on February 19, 2008
    this is getting so interesting. i hope you update soon. i need the rest. it really caught my attention and i'm really looking forward to finishing it

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  • From QueenB on February 19, 2008
    Ch. 27 Well, that was a shocker and I thought nothing would be after reading about Arthur Weasley's murder attempt. I know this is Hermione's worry--that Harry is turning into another Voldemort. But I can't believe he would say it out loud. I'm sure there's a method behind his madness...I hope.

    Calixa is a darned pain. She thinks that Harry has gathered up everyone in order to kill them? Has she not seen the extent of his power? I'm beginning to believe he could have targeted and killed each and every single one of them while they were sleeping! And why would he call Hermione and Minerva there if that was his intentions? As witnesses? She may not be a complete idiot but she's coming close. Maybe Harry should just silence her if she can't say anything useful.
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  • From QueenB on February 19, 2008
    Ch. 26 I was expecting this. However, Draco's submission and Harry's undoubted excitement somehow heighten the sexuality. But Harry calling that place his playground is rather frightening. It would suggest that he's used it before and, if so, on whom and when? I wonder if Hermione knows about it...

    I'm glad her book smarts is reasserting itself. In this story, she was coming off as a priggish pompous self-righteous bore. That conversation she had with Draco and Harry about the sexual tension was rather funny. Maybe the three of them can forge another group that will deal with the dangerous situation within and without Hogwarts.
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  • From QueenB on February 19, 2008
    Ch. 25 Ah, Calixa is quite the clever Slytherin, isn't she? Still, I don't think she gets to tell Harry what to do about house points. She's still on probation about her assassination attempt and one heroic act doesn't give her the right to demand a reward.

    Well, now that Hermione has revealed to Harry the nature of the situation, I wonder what he's going to do about it.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 19, 2008
    What? Is he out of his mind? I sooo need chapter 28!!!
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  • From cravedom on February 18, 2008
    Not only it was hot it was also educational. I had no idea what a Dragon
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  • From Alpacamom on February 18, 2008
    Wow....just...gah......very well written.
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