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Reviews for The Lion and the Serpent

By : emilywaters
  • From on February 18, 2008
    I've got to say that I love this. I started reading it last night and I finished it tonight. It's excellent! They progressed realistically (in such a crazy setting) and the kinky sex was well worth the wait. Keep going. This story is just great. I don't trust Calixa at all, though... The kid bothers me. But I guess she is all Draco has. I also love how you've written Harry. Everyone usually writes him as some virginal dork, even though he's a hardened war hero, I would think.
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  • From jaimie on February 18, 2008
    fuck that was hot! I definitely look forward to more updates like that! *fans self*
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  • From potterlover on February 18, 2008
    that was fantastic. i thought it very tastefully done. congrats
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 17, 2008
    Exactly what I would expect from this Harry. Draco needed to be controlled and Harry did it. I still don't trust Cali. Soo need chapter 27!!!
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  • From Dezra on February 17, 2008
    Very beautifully written.
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  • From hpn827 on February 17, 2008
    Harry is kind of scary sometimes. I can't even imagine what he's going to do next.
    I loved the lemon. For someone inexperienced as Harry, he did really great.
    Thank you.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 17, 2008
    Oh. My. God. YES!!! That was so delicious! That was like the most erotic, beautiful, and dare I say romantically depicted S&M scene I've read in fan fiction! I kid you not. You really put your foot into that. I'm aroused and I have no one here to whip me :( That was just really really....god, thank you. What did I like about it? Draco's acquiescence and need for the lash, his silent appreciation, Harry knowing how to push him just past the point where he thought he couldn't take it anymore and Harry and Draco's understanding that in order for it to be perfect Harry had to take everything from him....The fact that Harry seems to just know naturally how to satisfy his and his slave's needs with no prior experience with sex just makes this more organic and powerful. It was very tastefully done and beautiful in the way you described it. Usually when people describe whipping scenes, they don't make the whip an extension of the person...you did and I felt like it was just another way for these two to make love. Awesome job!
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  • From X5927alpha on February 17, 2008
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY KINKY SEX!!!!

    More?
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 17, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 26!!! He's planning to end this in 2 wks? But how?
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 17, 2008
    So Harry's own darkness protects him from Voldie's and Hermione and Draco are falling under that shield as well. I wonder what Calixa would say to that...I'm starting to wonder about her, where will she fit in all of this at the end. That's so cute Hermione telling them that the sexual tension is so tight she could hang bras from it. I hope they will be getting over that tension soon : )
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  • From cameowitch on February 17, 2008
    Colour me surprised! The saying is true "It's always the quiet ones". Good job springing Arthur in there. I would have figured Molly or even Percy but not Arthur. Keep the chapters coming!
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  • From QueenB on February 17, 2008
    Ch. 24 That was the LAST thing I'd expected. Was that ordinary murderous family revenge we just read or the fallout from Voldemort's death at work? Both things could be responsible, I suppose. Even the mildest of people might be driven to revenge when someone they love is murdered in such a brutal fashion. But, when I think about it, I'm more inclined to believe the latter is at fault.

    Like Draco said, why wait a year? Why wait until he's under Harry's protection? Draco was fairly helpless for a long time; Arthur Weasley could have killed him before he became Harry's slave, back when Draco was still a target for all the other students in Hogwarts. Waiting until he was under the protection of the powerful Savior of the Wizarding World makes no sense whatsoever--unless Arthur became so unbalanced under the magical toxicity of Voldemort's extermination that he chose this method and this time to kill Draco.

    Seeing Harry remain unharmed by the Killing Curse was chilling. What has happened to him that he can absorb that kind of force without perishing or going insane?
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  • From QueenB on February 17, 2008
    Ch. 23 Are these people idiots? What, they think with the collar gone, Draco is no longer Harry's property or that Harry won't protect him? I don't know what Calixa thinks she's doing. Then again, maybe there's purpose to her madness.

    That ring she's wearing acts like a tracking device, yes? If she doesn't show for her classes, someone is going to come looking for her and where she is, Draco is. I wonder if the kidnappers realize that. I bet we're going to find out.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 17, 2008
    Oh shit! Harry is a superbad ass! Stopping AK's with his bare hands and then throwing them away like it's a baseball? lol. I LOVE it. I was surprised at Arthur Weasley's appearance, especially in this way, but it does make sense. I hope Harry isn't planning something suicidal...god help him. It's kinda sweet Calixa offered herself in Draco's place...maybe there's good in her after all. I wonder how this is all gonna work out. Your writing is really amazing because you get right to the point with little detail or prose but it still packs a punch. It's hard to say so much and not write so much, that takes a bit of talent. Can't wait to see what's next : )
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  • From Mitamay on February 17, 2008
    Daaaamn, what in the hell happened to Harry that even Unforgivables do him no harm!? And Arthur?? I never would've guessed! More! EM
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