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Reviews for To Play with Fire

By : Serinah
  • From genna on March 20, 2008
    I have problems when I write in balancing the details. It can be too fast and the story suffers from having too few details or it can be too slow and have too many details.

    Here, I notice how much the characters are thinking. They interact but they don't necessarily spend a lot of time talking to each other.

    Good luck with your busy schedule.
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  • From kazfeist on March 14, 2008
    Thanks, Serinah! I got to GE fairly often. You've done a great job with a familiary plot idea. I seem to remember the broken left hand...did you post this, a while ago, over at FF.net, too? Anyway, thanks for the update and I'll go over to GE for the rest. :D
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  • From skydancer on February 29, 2008
    "listening" to Draco's thoughts in the story really makes everything all that more realistic.....enjoying this very much!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on February 28, 2008
    oh come on draco go get ur girl!! i love this please update again soon doll!
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  • From WriterChick1990 on February 26, 2008
    wow really lovin this cant wait for more
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  • From chickaboo on February 25, 2008
    *Gasp!* Oh my goodness! I can't believe this, I feel for Draco I really do. Great story, I really hope you update again soon!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 19, 2008
    more please!
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  • From ichiruki on February 13, 2008
    Liked Chapter Two, interesting development, makes me want to skip the review thing, and move straight to three. LOL.

    My only suggestions is that I think you might need a beta to catch some of the little errors, but over all they weren't too distracting. I think the one that stands out to mind is "But the truth was that Malfoy could be described as handsome, if not [for] his ugly ever present sneer."
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  • From ichiruki on February 13, 2008
    hmmm quite the interesting first chapter, I can't wait to see what else happens in the next.
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  • From brklygrl958 on February 12, 2008
    Excellent story! Keep the updates coming!
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  • From Serinah on February 11, 2008
    I cannot find a way to respond to reviews, is it me? Anyway, thanks for the reviews guys, I appreciate it. I'll probably update during the weekend.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2008
    Please update soon, this story is amazing and I NEED to read more.
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