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By : klbblk
  • From ANON - cj on July 16, 2015
    Read both of the books absolutely, amazing. You captured both of their personalities very well. I would like to see more of your works!

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  • From kierasama on February 26, 2013
    I loved this story, and His as well. I will definately be passing this story alone to my friends. They'll love it too.
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  • From TriniMinx on October 10, 2008
    OMG.
    I read "His" having no idea what I was getting into when I started reading it, and then I read "Mine."
    I think you might be insane. lol Good lordy.

    While, I found quite a bit of your material to be very disturbing (and I skipped/skimmed over a bit of it), the main story was very interesting. I was impressed, I would have NEVER thought of a storyline like that in a million years. Wow.

    It is a cute ending though.

    I have to say, one of the things that did bother me the MOST was Tom's continuous NEED to perform the Cruciatus on her. Oh, I hated it. I hated him. I wanted to try and like him, but ugh, I couldn't. Not even at the end when he hugged his kiddies. He was still an arrogant ass while she was giving birth. That IS something that continued to both me in both stories.

    Needless to say, I don't think I'll be reading anything similar to this on purpose in the future. I'm not one for the disturbing/violent stuff.

    But yea, kudos and brownie points for being VERY creative and making a complex and highly interesting storyline regardless. It was quite the 'dark' education, lol.

    Best of luck with your other stories :o)
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  • From Mellow03 on August 21, 2008
    Hello, good story. Hope ya will go to next series where Hermione get dark, without her getting angry or annoyed, unlike her husband when she want to hurt people. Unlike her daughter that is bit darker than her, since she want to hurt people. Not to same extend as to her father as you say with no morals. Hermione that was dark when she was in another mode, from one of four founders. It is good idea if you can awake her another mode and maybe blend together or so. It is more like she is tolerate to her husband's darkness, but not accepting fully as she is not same or almost same as him.
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 14, 2008
    This was an incredible ending. I enjoyed reading it and loved how Ava was the more evil child. I am also glad that Severus and Narcissa had a little girl together, and that Draco found a wife as well.
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  • From redrubycutie on July 13, 2008
    I love this story sad that it is done.
    ~Ruby~
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  • From sjauthor on July 07, 2008
    This is generally a good story, I think. I did read 'his' first. It's interesting, but there is one thing that annoys me in both this story and in 'his':

    Would OF
    Should OF
    Could OF
    Had OF

    These should be:

    Would HAVE
    Should HAVE
    Could HAVE
    Had HAVE

    Sorry. Just seems to appear a lot and it bugs me.
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  • From redrubycutie on July 07, 2008
    good chapter i liked it. update soon please.
    ~Ruby~
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 06, 2008
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more. I hope that Hermione has a boy and a girl, the boy being the oldest so that Tom gets to name him. Then Hermione will get to name the girl.
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  • From redrubycutie on July 01, 2008
    love this chapter cant wait to see what happens.
    ~Ruby~
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 30, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I hope that Hermione did make the horocrux and that she will be alright. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From joeshmo on June 25, 2008
    OH...MY...GODD!!! That's AMAZINGG!!! I can't wait to see what happeneds! I'd be pretty pissed if i was her...
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 23, 2008
    AN excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon to see what happens to Hermione. I hope that she and the twins will be alright.
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  • From redrubycutie on June 23, 2008
    I love this chapter. I hope Hermione is ok by falling down the stairs. Cant wait for the next chapter.
    ~Ruby~
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 16, 2008
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more to see what it is that Voldemort is keeping from Hermione.
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