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Reviews for A Marriage Made in Heaven...

By : slygriff21
  • From ANON - Lydia on March 07, 2008
    I really loved this. Just like all of you stroies. I hpe you write some more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 07, 2008
    That was a wonderful story. I am glad that Hermione survived and went on to have a second child.
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  • From SiriuslyDistracted on March 07, 2008
    jamie Hynamen... well at least it wasnt adam savage lol. Loved the story
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  • From Jocelyn25 on March 07, 2008
    You know i really really loved your story, but i was a bit dissappointed at the end. it felt like you were rushing through it to get it finished asap.

    Still a very nice story, thanks for sharing

    jocy
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2008
    You've got a good idea but your characters are very shallow. You need to take a little more time and develop their characters instead of just doing a surface plot. Keep going, you have potential.
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  • From CB13 on March 04, 2008
    Wonderful story. Just a short pointer - I think that instead of the marriage law being "repelled", perhaps the word you're looking for is "repealed"?

    Cheers, and thanks for writing!

    CB
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 04, 2008
    Excellent. I hope that both of them will be ok. I can't wait to read more soon to see what happens.
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  • From nanoq on March 04, 2008
    Great story, I love reading it.
    I'm a little scared for Hermione, I hope she will alright..

    I love mythbusters!! I'm waching it right now!
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  • From ANON - Winnifred on March 04, 2008
    Cliffhanger! :'(

    You update fast, so I guess I can survive...

    Hehe :D


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  • From chickaboo on March 04, 2008
    Ah yes. The dreaded pregnancy hormones. I remember them well. I'd feel cranky and be bitchy and then feel guilty for being bitchy for no particular reason. And then I remember that I was preggers and had every damn reason in the book to be bitchy even if there wasn't really a reason. To hell with logic and reason. Being bitchy for no reason is a pregnant woman's prerogative...men would be a lot better off if they just accepted that. They don't even have to try to understand it. Just accept it. lol Anyway, now that I'm done preaching....great update! I can't wait for more!
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  • From wishyouwere on March 03, 2008
    Hello!
    I have been following your story since it was first posted, and justed wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying it. Keep up the good writing...I cannot wait until the next chapter.
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  • From catysmom1028 on March 03, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on March 03, 2008
    Excellent. I am glad that Severus apologized to Hermione and showed her that he loves everything about her. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From Tenar10r on March 03, 2008
    Awww cute!
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  • From catysmom1028 on March 01, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.


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