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Reviews for A Marriage Made in Heaven...

By : slygriff21
  • From Heidi191976 on February 29, 2008
    I hope that Narcissa got the Dementor's Kiss for trying to kill Severus,just like her husband got. I am glad that Draco finally learned that muggleborns are just the same as purebloods. I think that it took a lot for him to apologize though after being raised the way he was. I look forward to reading more to see what Severus and Hermione are having. I think it would be nice for Hermione's mother to also find someone to love and be with since her divorce is finalized.
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  • From theeloquentquill on February 29, 2008
    Well, this is a nice story. Its a cute idea and has a nice little plot. However, I think that everything is happening much too fast. They fell in love so quickly and you didnt really get to see that develope. Nor with the "revenge". That was a good twist to this, but it just wasnt developed completely.With Draco, I love that he turned "good" but it was so sudden, almost random. The reader never got to feel the love, the hate, or the remorse. Perhaps, this is how you prefer to write. It just seemed to me, that the reader couldnt really get involved with the story.

    Good luck,

    Yours in Eloquence
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 29, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From dannilawless on February 29, 2008
    a very rushed chapter. :(
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 29, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on February 28, 2008
    Excellent. I am glad that Hermione and Severus get to remain married and that Lucius has been sentenced to the Dementor's Kiss. It serves him right because he tried to break up a marriage just to secure the Malfoy line and then kill her off. I can't wait to read more to see how Draco reacts to the news about his father.
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  • From ANON - S on February 28, 2008
    Ah, and the confusion sets in, one step before realization
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  • From AeroCherry on February 28, 2008
    I absolutely love this chapter. I especially liked Draco's reaction at the end. It is so good to see instead of the impulsive reaction expected he began to question his parents ideals. Excellent job and keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From dannilawless on February 28, 2008
    extremely fluffy and a very off canon snape i must say. but entertaining none the less.
    Keep it coming. I'm intrigued as to how Lucius will challange their marraige

    Best Wishes
    Slytherin-Princess
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  • From goofball on February 28, 2008
    Thoughts on chapter 6
    Even though I like the story there is something that really threw me off. You have described Severus quite a bit out of character to be a sensible person (no problem with that, I do that too). Then they have their wedding night, Hermione still being a virgin and there is no real touching once there in bed. Instead Severus puts his hand right between her legs. I felt like "What?!? Did I miss something?" It's just so unexpected fast that and the way Severus is in this story
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 27, 2008
    Excellent. I hope that Hermione and Severus will be able to stay married to keep Lucius from taking her away. I can't wait to read the next chapter soon.
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  • From LadyIdori on February 27, 2008
    Great story can't wait to read more...
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  • From Utopia on February 27, 2008
    Got it! I think its the slight Americanisms and their wording that's nagging at me. As a Brit they tend to get up my nose a bit, but these are more subtle than other fics I've seen, which is probably why its taken a while for me to spot them.
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  • From on February 27, 2008
    I love it! I wonder what nasty Lucius has up his sleeve...
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  • From chickaboo on February 27, 2008
    Okay so on one hand I'm totally happy for Hermione and Severus cause they've discovered their love for one another and admitted it to the other. But on the other hand, I'm totally nervous and freaking out cause Lucius has been known to cause many a problem and now he's focused all his energy on making problems for Hermione and Severus....there's only one way to alleviate my panic and I think you know what that is. Update again SOON! lol Great update, I can't wait for more!
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