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Reviews for A Marriage Made in Heaven...

By : slygriff21
  • From catysmom1028 on February 27, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Tenar10r on February 26, 2008
    Nice story, keep going!
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  • From FifteenStitches on February 26, 2008
    I love it so far, I just wish the chapters were longer. :[ Update soon please!
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 26, 2008
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more to see what Lucius is planning and if they can both stay safe. I think that their love for each other is too strong to be torn apart.
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  • From Utopia on February 26, 2008
    This has a very promising plot and you're starting to develop the characters nicely and morph them into your own specifications.

    My only comment is a gut feeling I'm getting, I can't quite put my finger on it - something seems a little bit odd plot-wise... Nothing major, just something nagging at me. I'll go back in a day or so and read again and see if I can find what it is. Maybe its because you use a writing style that is a careful blend of formal and informal at once? And I'm not used to that??

    Apart from something nagging at me (one reader among a score of others, so its probably only my opinion! Don't worry!), this is very good! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Lydia on February 25, 2008
    This is so great. I have always loved your writing. I hope you post soon.
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  • From ANON - Zigflorian on February 25, 2008
    Very good, should be interesting to see how things develop.

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  • From ANON - triz on February 25, 2008
    please update soon. can't wait. love your stories!!!
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  • From mamabear52 on February 23, 2008
    Hurry ! Hurry ! We need more, we can't wait for the rest, don't make us wait too long, suspense is dreadful.


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  • From chickaboo on February 21, 2008
    Hey! Get back here! He carries her across the threshold and then......(this is where you fill in the blank) LOL Great update, I can't wait for more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 21, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From Delfin on February 21, 2008
    ohhh goodie =)

    its nice, update soon :)

    n i like that Sevvie isnt so harsh or atleast he doesnt appears to be :)
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 21, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Pumkin on February 20, 2008
    it's good so far. please update soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 19, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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