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Reviews for A Marriage Made in Heaven...

By : slygriff21
  • From SorceressFujin on February 19, 2008
    The first chapter made this sound interesting, but once you got to Severus and Hermione's characters... they are just way too out of character. It makes it a bit annoying to read, especially since they all seem to have a 'flat' talking personality. The plot, (i love ml fics), seems good, but I really suggest going back and making the characters more like themselves.
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 19, 2008
    This was excellent. I hope that Lucius won't try anything now that Severus and Hermione are married, but if he does then please let them both be alright. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From chickaboo on February 19, 2008
    Great update, I'm glad that they're getting the support they need from the ones they know and care about. But I must admit to being rather curious about what Lucius has got up his sleeve.....? Can't wait for more!
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 19, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Winnifred on February 18, 2008
    This is awesome :D

    I can't wait to read more.

    This is the first story i've ever read where snape had family
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  • From chickaboo on February 18, 2008
    What bug flew up Ron's arse? lol Great updates, I can't wait to see the Malfoy's reaction to this new development. Hope you can update again soon!
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 18, 2008
    This is great. I can't believe that Ron is acting like a jerk. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From SFPANTHER on February 18, 2008
    How dare you not tell me you started a new story? tries to give you an evil glare but gives up

    I love how you did started this. Naturally, nothing is like it is in the book so I am loving it even more. I hope you will email me and let me know when you update.

    Awesome start and I can tell it will be an awesome story like always.

    Love ya sis,
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  • From Sampdoria on February 18, 2008
    I liked this! I liked that Severus behaved like a mature man smart enough to make the best out of a situation he knows he will not be able to avoid. I also liked how the spoke about respect and fidelity, two very important parts in a marriage not tufted on love, but between two persons forced into a situation and wanting to make the best of it!
    I hope ofcourse that inbetween a satisfying development of Severus and Hermiones relationsship you will wind plenty of time for some heavy Ron bashing? His treatment of Hermione makes him deserve pain and humiliation and lots of it! I hate the Ron/Hermione pairing, never have two been so unsuitable for eachother, and I am no fan of Ron so any damage done to him....:-))) I expect Lucius to make his disapproval of twarted plans known, but have faith in you having Severus twarting his plans even more. Update again soon!!!
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  • From angelnomiko on February 18, 2008
    ohh man i cant belive ron just did that ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - chloe on February 18, 2008
    i love ml fics. this one so far has the makings for a great one.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 16, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 16, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Carine on February 16, 2008
    Hi slytheringryffindor21,
    very promising beginning.Though they are always Au,I just love the marriage law challenge stories.LOL Sureves Epans
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  • From ANON - Bell on February 16, 2008
    hmmmm....i'm not sure if i like it...don't take it personal i just want to say i's a bit short... ::it's a little hint that you should write more and soon :D::
    i love ML fics so i hope your story will be really good!the only thing confusing is...the Snapes seem like a loving family. I always liked the idea of Severus' childhood to be miserable (that's why he was such a bastard in his adult life) but maybe you'll make me change my mind ::lol::
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