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Reviews for A Marriage Made in Heaven...

By : slygriff21
  • From purefaith91 on January 01, 2011
    Yay! Love it and it looks like maybe Draco will see the error of his parents. It is refreshing to have SS with a good and loving family, which allows him to be human. Excellent! p
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  • From purefaith91 on January 01, 2011
    She really is perfectly matched to Snape. I hate that Lucius is rearing his ugly head. It is hard enough for them to form a couple without dealing with a psychopath. Excellent so far. p
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 01, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From GuiltyPleasure on August 08, 2008
    I liked this story, but I felt that most of the conflict was over before it really even began.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 06, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ann on July 25, 2008
    You have jaime hynamen as a healer, i laugh for ages when i saw that. i wonder if they will ever get him to deliver a baby on mythbusters
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  • From mlui on May 21, 2008
    This is a very nice story for an OOC story. I liked the plot but there were numerous grammatical mistakes littered throughout the story. Usually, it doesn't bother me but you made the same mistakes over and over again that it started to grate on my nerves (luckily it didn't turn me off of reading the rest of the story)...for example, it should me "Hermione and I," not "Me and Hermione." The correct punctuation marks should be used, "?" for questions (not ","). Sorry, it's just that I noticed similar mistakes in your other stories as well. If you can improve on this, then the reading for the reader would be more enjoyable. If you need a beta in the future, feel free to contact me.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 02, 2008
    I realy like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 12, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From lovesnogger on March 10, 2008
    jamie hynaman hn...isn't that a mythbuster?!!!!! lol great finish btw ;p
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  • From mamabear52 on March 10, 2008
    Your Story is great ! I really enjoyed it. Just one little thing though. In chapter 15 you said that the Marriage Law was REPELLED, it really should say REPEALED. Repelled is to throw off something, like a raincoat repels rain. To Repeal is to stop or disolve a law. Hope this helps. Keep on writing.
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  • From Utopia on March 10, 2008
    2 months early and coming in at 5lb! I was 2 months early and was 3lb 3oz. 5lb is a bit big for a premature baby!
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  • From chickaboo on March 08, 2008
    Aww! What a cute, sweet, fun story. I was worried at the end there, but I'm so glad that Hermione made it. Thank you for sharing it!
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  • From Tenar10r on March 08, 2008
    Terrific!
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  • From ANON - Karen on March 07, 2008
    I am a bit confused. I thought that they were going to do a c-section if the organs were developed enough. This is a quick proceedure, especially in emergencies. But, you write as if they induced natural child birth. It doesn't make sense.
    Also, the organs couldn't be "completely developed" at that age. They could be mostly developed, that with help the baby would live, but you seem to write it as if everything will be fine.
    Last, the baby is VERY big at that young gestation. At that size, the baby would have weighed well over 10 pounds at birth!
    Now, while it might sound as if this is a "flame" review, it isn't really. I am enjoying this story. Yes, sometimes Severus sound too mushy to be Severus, but that is easy to overlook. You have been writing a very enjoyable story! The above are just some technical things, that can be easily fixed. Pat yourself on the back for a good story!
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