Reviews for A Christmas Break

By : ghildred
  • From Simon on October 17, 2025

    Wow, even though this diverges from canon pretty quickly, it doesn't matter, because you can sense the thrill they get, not just from feeling alive, but after they start having sex several times in one day. I'm not sure about the final chapter, I can't see how Harry and Hermione would keep their desires in check to allow their separate relationships to pan out and not affect them by having sex with each other behind their partners backs


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  • From luvhp on May 29, 2008
    Of course they DID@!!!!!

    Loved it, very sweet.
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  • From rubberduck on March 22, 2008
    what a great story. i really liked how you had their friendship grow stronger. and the fact that they ended up with ron and ginny at the end was the correct way to go. there are different types of love and while they have the love of friendship for each other, the romantic love is there for the weasleys. the only negative i'll give you is the spelling and grammar. that needs fixing.
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  • From MidnightLilly on March 02, 2008
    Oh they did, and the Weaselys are idiots to not catch on.
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  • From tommye on February 23, 2008
    love the third chapter.
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  • From MidnightLilly on February 23, 2008
    Hmm, if that happend wouldn't there be consequences? You can't do something like that and not get off with no consequences.
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  • From ANON - Ron is gay on February 23, 2008
    I really hope that this isn't a one time only thing. It would ruin the whole story!
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on February 23, 2008
    So far this has been a pretty good fic. I really like this pairing, but not enough people do it. Keep it up! :)
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  • From missmonet on February 19, 2008
    i hope that you are going to write more here cause i want to know more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2008
    This was actually good.
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  • From ANON - moirane on February 18, 2008
    thats mean. leaving it there. grr
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  • From ANON - equinox on February 18, 2008
    Yeah, you stopped in the wrong place. Keep the story going...its a good twist to what the book didn't do. :)
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  • From ANON - missmonet on February 16, 2008
    more more more omg that was so good i hope that you continue with this story.

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  • From jay86 on February 16, 2008
    Who would have thought Hermione would actually let loose lol keep up the great story writing!.
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  • From tommye on February 15, 2008
    great story imgeorgenotfred. can't wait to read more.
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