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By : wishyouwere
  • From jddammann on December 02, 2008
    My theory is to copy someone else's who has written many stories on this website.

    ie: Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

    This is the most commonly used disclaimer I have seen by authors.

    I hope it works out, I would hate to loose you!!!
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  • From ANON - MistressAmortencia on December 01, 2008
    (In response to your disclaimer)


    They did this to my story a while back as well. I think that perhaps if you stated specifically that Harry Potter belongs to JKR it may satisfy their (quite ridiculous) scruples. I would hate to see you leave as I am enjoying your writing very much and hope that this works for you.

    -MA
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  • From Angie30 on December 01, 2008
    Goodness knows I've had to re-written those darn disclaimers more then once if you would like feel free to use mine....Disclaimer: I don
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  • From TriniMinx on December 01, 2008
    Hmm, your disclaimer seems fine to me.

    I wrote a story a long time ago and posted it here, you are more than welcome to use mine:

    "Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. "


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  • From bournespeed on December 01, 2008
    Brilliant story, please don't stop it.
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 01, 2008
    I do not see anything wrong with your disclaimer. It says that you do not own Harry Potter and that it is fiction. Also that you do not make any money from it. If you do decide to post elswhere please let me know where you do. Thanks, and it is a great story.

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  • From Citten on December 01, 2008
    honey you are doing better and more professional disclamers then most writers, so 'screw' (excuse the french) others who are making you feel that you have not done it right. granted i am no writer but you are doing just as everyone else is that you dont own any characters or making any money that you are just writing a story set in alternate universe. maybe that is what they are refering to the fact that it is not following cannon and wish you to just add that it is au. other than so serious messed up people---i loved the last chapter!!!!! :) i am so totally glad that you said about minerva i feel the same way about her. i think jk did a great job of her charater, she makes me think of my own grandmother. :) i loved the dinner secne and i really enjoyed their evening with them! :) i will tell you this though if you do decide to go somewhere else PLEASE let me know cause i would love to read the rest of your story despite what others are telling you or making you feel, i love your story sweety! :) so i hope that you keep on writing!
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  • From diamondmouse on November 30, 2008
    that was pretty hot! and i love how you have them both going to wear rings :)
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  • From wishyouwere on November 30, 2008
    Thanks sevsgirl,
    I am starting to feel mildly rebellious, and do not want to change the stupid disclaimer...again! You read it...did it seem like any of those elements were missing? I just put them in a different order. Why don't they just have a standard set of disclaimers that gets tagged to every story?
    And why am I spedning so much time on this when I have a story to finish? lol - wait for the next chapter - Harry finally makes an appearance.
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  • From ANON - sevsgirl on November 30, 2008
    "Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story."

    This was copied from Ms_Figg's story. She posts here all the time and to my knowledge hasn't had a problem with the disclaimer issue.

    Hope it helps.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Citten on November 29, 2008
    That was a great chapter! i totally loved what merniva did that was awsome! :) i will be looking forward to the coming chapters!!! :) i was right though about it being that hermione was pregant. ;) i love how severus is he is so wonderful and sweet he also totally understands hermione! so lots more chapters to come right?! :) and soon?!
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 29, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From diamondmouse on November 29, 2008
    awwww that was amazing! i am so glad that you updated i love how minerva is in this lol
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