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Reviews for The Mentor

By : wishyouwere
  • From ANON - Voracious reader on November 29, 2008
    Nice chapter (19)and I'm flattered you'd want to quote what is basically an adaptation of something I remember one of my brothers saying; feel free, but I might use it too! Good to know we can add to the wizarding slang, LOL. The bonding scene was just lovely, and Minerva plotting like an interfereing mother-in-law was just perfect.
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  • From Angie30 on November 17, 2008
    I have an idea what's up with Hermione, seeing as how I'm a mom of a two year. She is pregnant! I'm so loving your story,I love how The Headmistress put the Mediwitch in her place lol. I look forward to reading more. Please update soon.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 26, 2008
    I just sat and read this entire story and I must say, "Brava!" I absolutely love it! No, you weren't subtle, but I am so happy about it, I don't care. ha ha ha I can't wait to see her reaction to it though. lol I know you just did, but please update again soon. And, thank you! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2008
    Lovin your work so far! Its so nice to be able to read a fic that has been so thoroughly checked. The characters are really well written and the plot works with in its own logic (i can read any story as long as it up holds its own internal logic). I would love to get more reaction from the other Staff members, Do they suspect? What do thay think? How would HG and SS deal with people suspecting/knowing about them.
    Cant wait to find out how they react to the soon to be new addition....if my guess is right. Please Please don't rush the ending it is a common mistake. While it is true that how you start a story is important., the same is also true of the ending.
    I am looking forward to reading more of your work. I personally hope its Snape centered. cant get enough of the bad boy turned good (Alan Rickman helps too lol)
    Hope this helps its my first review

    Sweet-sev
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  • From ANON - Rei on October 25, 2008
    I have just one question.
    Will the baby have black, curly hair or straight brown hair?
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From jddammann on October 24, 2008
    Not a mom, but not at all, but then how? Loving the story!
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  • From ANON - makaem on October 24, 2008
    It's amazing how quickly you feel tired. Really fun story.
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  • From ANON - HermioneMalfoyFan on October 24, 2008
    Periode later than usual and light? Nausea, tired, hard time to concentrate? Well, you don't need to be a mum to guess that she's pregnant! :-)
    Please continue your nice story! It's a delight to read!
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  • From voraciousreader on October 23, 2008
    Well, they tried to be careful, but it looks like one of Severus' little guys sank the Quaffle, so to speak. When's the baby shower?
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  • From Apryl on October 23, 2008
    That persistent tired feeling... dead giveaway! And I'm not even a mom. Never been PG either! I'll bet that's why the potion made her feel ill.
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  • From jddammann on October 10, 2008
    Absolutely wonderful! I'm so glad she and he took some time to think and really acknowledge what they feel for each other and what they want their futures to be, and of course that they came together again! Love those happy endings! :-)
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  • From diamondmouse on October 08, 2008
    that was fantastic! i'm so gald they are back together
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  • From diamondmouse on October 07, 2008
    lmao that was great
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  • From Angie30 on October 06, 2008
    Well her response was quite unexpected, can't wait to read more! Brilliant as always!
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  • From voraciousreader on October 06, 2008
    I'm so glad you had him be honest with her, at least he respects that side of her! I'm also glad you are continuing with this story, I was afraid it had been abandoned. More, please!
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