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Reviews for The Mentor

By : wishyouwere
  • From SidneyRae on July 05, 2008
    this is a great story. i do hope you will update soon.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on April 23, 2008
    you've got a great story here. its not too dark and although i really wasn't a fan of hermione and snape i think you may have changed my mind =) please continue the story...i would really love to know how it ends! until then...happy writing!!!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on April 05, 2008
    brilliant writing wish! i love this!
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  • From Utopia on April 02, 2008
    Sperm can survive for three days, and it's one heck of a swim for them! (Hence emergency contraception working for upto 72hrs). Surely he could slip her something in her tea to prevent pregnancy? Trapping her with a child won't gain him any favours - yes, Hermione would make a brilliant mother, but it should be her choice to be so (in my opinion). I'm looking forward to him telling her it was a painkiller and fertility aid he gave her!
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  • From Utopia on April 02, 2008
    10

    he he! Your fic is one of those where I REALLY take note of the tiny details, as well as the big picture! There isn't many that do that to me.

    I had to laugh that Severus told her she was perfect... whilst staring at her breasts! lol! Typical bloke!
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  • From Utopia on April 02, 2008
    Well, I guess letting your innocence pay for uni is better than someone I knew who pole danced to pay for hers! lol!
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  • From Utopia on April 02, 2008
    7

    I have a very clear image in my mind, and I'm not sure if it was what you meant for the reader to imagine...

    I can see from Severus's point of view: Hermione stood before the fire, the dim flickering light from the candles surrounding the room making her scantily clad body glow golden; the silky fabric of her knickers reflecting the flickering light back. I can imagine her surrounded by a halo of light from the fire behind her, like the penumbra of a solar eclipse.

    I'm not sure if that was what you wanted us to see, but it is what I saw in my mind.
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  • From Utopia on April 02, 2008
    It's OK sweetie, you did a marvelous job of picking your first lemon! x
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  • From kittyperry on April 01, 2008
    Wow, that's really well written. I read the whole fic straight through and enjoyed it very much indeed. I did find the gentle sloppy Snape a bit annoying, but then the Dark Snape took over, and it was pure brilliance. Update soon... I can't wait to see what happens next.
    Kitty
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  • From neelix on April 01, 2008
    I'm so glad you're updating this story, I really love it... love that they love each other and haven;t said it yet, very sweet!!!
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  • From Citten on March 31, 2008
    well things could turn bad fast now with weasley in the picture i do hope that they will get over their shared views of scaring each other off and just do it but then we would have no irratation and all stories need some of that! :)
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  • From ANON - jan on March 31, 2008
    im not very good at reviews but all i need to say is WOW exceptional story keep up the good work and by the way your writing severus in a way that i probably would if i had your gift of writing, Looking forward to the next update take care all the best jan
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  • From ANON - PhantomRose on March 31, 2008
    love this sorry, i want more each time i read it!!! keep continuing with this story! it is very good! good luck XD
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  • From ANON - mariteri on March 31, 2008
    Ahh! And so the plot twist arrives! Excellent story so far. I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work and update when you can.
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on March 31, 2008
    Woot! Another great chappie! I wonder why Ron is at Hogwarts? Dum de dum dum daaah!

    I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon!

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