Click Here!

Reviews for The Mentor

By : wishyouwere
  • From theredzebra on March 09, 2008
    I like your unofficial title, The Mentor. It's simple and explanatory. Maybe "Hermione's Mentor"?
    Report Review

  • From theredzebra on March 09, 2008
    Well, your story is the reason I finally registered so I could review. Love the premise and plot. I especially like that you have kept Snape true to himself and his darker desires. It's hard to find great fanfiction, but The Mentor definitely classifies as such. Please, tell us some more of the story...
    Report Review

  • From SidneyRae on March 07, 2008
    this story is so good. i love the way it is going. i can't til you post more.
    Report Review

  • From skydancer on March 06, 2008
    Ch 10: sweet! irrigardless of the infinity.....what???? typo!
    pet your plot bunnies for their great job.
    Report Review

  • From Tenar10r on March 06, 2008
    Very Sweet
    Report Review

  • From NutsAboutHarry on March 06, 2008
    You bugger! You're right I do want to kill you!..LOL

    That is the meanest way possible to end a chapter...how could you do that to me?....he he.

    Anyway great chapter and I hope SOMETHING will happen if you get my drift...he he
    Report Review

  • From NutsAboutHarry on March 05, 2008
    Oh woweeeee! I love this story and they way you add just the right amount of sexual tension. Can you email me when you add the next chapter? (Which I'm sure will be steamier than a sauna...LOL)

    Great work I love it!
    Report Review

  • From Jocelyn25 on March 03, 2008
    hm i really prefered the virgin part. i lived 4 years with my ex without having sex (unbelieveable but shows your body knows better !!).
    Report Review

  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on March 03, 2008
    hermione can still be a virgin and be a little wild there is nothing wrong with it. i was like that when i was a virgin i got a lot of ideas and moves from porno movies and fantsy of men i wanted.
    Report Review

  • From skydancer on March 03, 2008
    Ch 2.....Awwww Severus...ever the actor!
    bravo, and now i'm off to chapter 3 and beyond!
    Report Review

  • From goofball on March 03, 2008
    I know I'm a spoil sport but somehow I couldn't quite imagine Hermione reacting the way she did since you have her as still being a virgin. And I'm not saying it's not hot what they're doing, not at all ;o) anyway, looking forward to seeing more :o)
    Report Review

  • From Jocelyn25 on March 03, 2008
    wahoo, that was HOT. i love LightDarkSeverus ;) the best there is!! And i cant wait for him to show our Hermione exactly what he means ;)
    LOVE IT
    Thank you

    Jocy
    Report Review

  • From Marisol226 on March 03, 2008
    I had to take a cold shower after reading this last chapter;)
    Report Review

  • From NutsAboutHarry on March 02, 2008
    Woot! I was wondering when you were going to update! I like your build up and hope things ebd up al fluffy!....I'm in a romantic mood....LOL
    Report Review

  • From homiesaywhattt on March 02, 2008
    :D I like this!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!