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Reviews for The Mentor

By : wishyouwere
  • From Nboulet on March 01, 2008
    Lovely. Absolutely lovely. You're a good writer. And I became lost in the story. Reminds me briefly of another fanfic ... The Tutor.

    Keep writing!!!
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on February 24, 2008
    Oooooohhhhh weeeeeeeee! Another chapter!

    I like this fic and ca't wait to see where you take it. I wasn't having a go at you personally about the chapter length its just that I find the really good fics (Such as yours) are so good I want to read forever!

    Anyway great work keep it up!
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  • From FifteenStitches on February 24, 2008
    You did a great job! Can't wait for the next chapter, and I love the new title. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From goofball on February 24, 2008
    Promising start. I'm looking forward to read more of your story! :o)
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  • From LadyJMarie on February 23, 2008
    so far so good, and I definately think that "mentor of the heart" would be a good title. however, if this story goes into bdsm, perhaps "master, mentor, friend" or "master, mentor, lover" would be a little better.
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  • From Myrna on February 23, 2008
    Hum...it's getting better and better! :)
    GeeZ.. We can say what we want but the fact is that, indeed, Severus Snape is hot!!
    I like your story..cannot wait to the other chapters!! ^^
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  • From CutiePie on February 23, 2008
    I'm very intrigued, lol I absolutely loved the interaction with Snape and Hermione. Brilliant work. Hope to read more soon.
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  • From SavineSnape on February 23, 2008
    Holy Smoke.........who wouldn't melt with Severus that close and flirting.......
    Beautifully written, really enjoying this.
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  • From Delfin on February 23, 2008
    oh my, i just read the 3 chapters n its good =D

    keep em coming :D
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  • From FifteenStitches on February 22, 2008
    I'm loving this!
    Please update...
    RIGHT NOW! lol!
    Looking for a title?
    How about "Teaching the Teacher?"
    Just a suggestion I came up with randomly.
    Love the story!
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  • From nonabloch on February 22, 2008
    Ok, Chapter 3...HOTT!!! Love it, love it! Please continue!
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on February 22, 2008
    Oh wow I really like the direction in which this story is going! I skipped this fic half a dozen times before I dived in because I absoloutely hate stories titled 'Untitled' I actually read the eviews before I read the fic and the enthusiastic reactions is what inspired me to read. Grammar and word flow is excellent but the chapters are way too short! I know as the author it's totally up to you how long each chapter will be...and maybe I'm just being picky. I write long chapters because I like reading long chapters. Apart from that I have no criticism al all!

    I think this fic could turn into a classic romantic story and I hope you will continue on with it!

    Please email me when you add the next and future chapters! (My email adress is in my profile).

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Marisol226 on February 22, 2008
    This is very, very good. I was a little surprised to see a story without a title, but once I started to read it, I found that it dosen't need a title. The suspense is great, I can hardly wait to read more.
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  • From SiriuslyDistracted on February 22, 2008
    ::Bounces excitedly:: I love where this is going,i cant wait to read more. Still no title though? if i may offer my humble idea... something like The Merits of Mentoring. (is that even spelled right?) Oh well keep up the excelent work.

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