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By : NymphetamineFixed
  • From ANON - Ariel on July 12, 2009
    Amazing story. It is rather incredible. Can't wait for more... hope there is more
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  • From ANON - Tab on July 11, 2009
    Female here can't wait to read the next update.
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  • From animallover6734 on July 11, 2009
    good chapter and im a girl my name shows it to.
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  • From ANON - Mukuro Meki on July 10, 2009
    I liked this one better as you said it did seem a bit rushed before and I'm Female
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  • From RavenTiger on July 10, 2009
    heh I love it. ^.^ I'm female by the way. =]
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  • From Callisto426 on July 10, 2009
    Awesome chapter! Looking for more! I so love this change in hermione, love the darker side!!



    -Shanika(Callisto)
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  • From IKilledTheCookie on June 11, 2009
    This is brilliant! Update? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - The 5 Virtues on May 22, 2009
    This is a wonderful story you're writing! I do hope you keep at it, and while I love and admired your dedication to giving a story everyone can enjoy please, pleeeeease don't let your fans affect YOUR story, it is still your story after all!
    What happens to the characters, what they do, how they act, and the consequences of those actions are all yours to dictate, don't let the preferences of your audience decide how you write something out! Follow any thought, pursue any idea to it's fullest. Heck, if you think of more than one way for a chapter to go give them ALL to us Chapter 13 A Chpater 13 B Chpater 13 Y, W, or Z! Follow the story the way your mind tells you to, take your reviewer's words to heart but don't let them control the way you tell your tale! :)
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  • From animallover6734 on May 17, 2009
    plzz update its realy good.
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  • From RavenTiger on May 14, 2009
    I think this story is awesome. I think you are building up sexual tension wonderfully. I love the banter between Bella and Ava (Hermione), and I wonder how you are including Lily in this story...-perverted giggle-. My only complaint is that you don't update fast enough -pouts-, but I can understand why it takes so long to update so no pressure. I'm glad you are writing this pairing because it is one of my fave pairings and it isn't written as much as it should be in my opinion. I came here today and saw that you updated and I was happy to see that. =] Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mukuro K Meki on May 06, 2009
    First off I'd like you that I love the story so far. And from personal experance I can tell you got Ava spot on with the discovery of enjoying being beaten and hurt during the act. I really enjoy the fact that their learning how addicting something like that can be, but again I ask will there be blood play? I beleave that that might be the next step in Bella's rule over Ava. But then again you are the auther and its your story to write, here's hoping for an update soon
    Mukuro
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  • From ANON - KNeit Raimond on February 18, 2009
    Very Very Nice Story!! I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading the rest!!!
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  • From Shay on January 11, 2009
    This is definitely one of my favorite Bellatrix stories I've read (and I've read too many for my own good). I like that Hermione/Ava stays in such control of her feelings even after she gives in and lets Bellatrix "win."
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  • From RavenTiger on December 19, 2008
    Ooh this is getting good. Can't wait for your next chapter. Peace, Raven.
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  • From TheRavenEmerald on December 11, 2008
    I'm so glad you are continuing to update this story. You actually made me swoon for Bella. I hated her throughout the books and now I'm hot for her. Damn good job.
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