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By : NymphetamineFixed
  • From animallover6734 on December 07, 2008
    update plzzz
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  • From ANON - Bella on December 03, 2008
    I will give you my first born if you update more *right now*
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  • From Intelligo on November 29, 2008
    Freaking sweet chapter man. Extremely hot, and I can't wait to see what you do next.

    I have to say...I love the ass if you can work that in at all.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 27, 2008
    Very entertaining. Sex scene was well done and kept me interested. Converstion afterwards made me smirk. Can't wait to see where it goes. Will eagerly await your next story update.
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  • From ANON - Crow on November 25, 2008
    Stop worrying the smut was great. And, hot!!! I mean that was the goal, right? ;) I was really glad to see an update. More soon plz!!

    "Then she was gone and Bella was left sitting alone in her room, just the way she liked it. Smug grin planted firmly on her face. Oh was she going to have some fun with this."
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  • From ANON - Guest on November 23, 2008
    Awesome fic! keep up the good work and update soon ;)
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  • From ANON - Mukuro Meki on November 19, 2008
    I love this fic so far, I look forward to the next chapter. I do have one quesion though, will there be blood play?
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  • From ANON - Crow on November 12, 2008
    YAY!!! you updated. I'm glad. ^_^ Thanks for the highly enjoyable story. Lemme just say the scene in the library? Hot, really hot. More plz!!!!
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  • From ANON - RavenTiger on November 10, 2008
    This is very very well-written. I can't wait to read what you write next. Update ASAP. Peace.
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  • From ANON - That Guy on November 08, 2008
    Just finished reading your story so far and i have to say im impressed, really good concept and well written (and not an over used storyline).
    I look forward to reading more, update soon, i'll be on the lookout....
    Laterz
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  • From ANON - madridcc on November 04, 2008
    i love the story,jajaja hermione is a crack. Hermione power. i will wait to the next chapter. xoxo
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  • From lisanoortje on November 04, 2008
    More more more!!! :D
    I'm in love with this story.
    I can't wait for the next chapter to come up!
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  • From ANON - Crow on November 03, 2008
    Hey thanx for the rocking update!!! I thought for a second there 'Ava' was gonna kiss Bellatrix. I can't wait for the next chapter. I gotta know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Wax-In-Your-Ears on October 25, 2008
    This new take on Bella and the other soon-to-be Death-eaters is intruiging. Instead of faceless skulls casting killing curses at random, you ee that they are actualy people with emotions, thoughts and conflicts. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
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  • From DragonMax on October 16, 2008
    WOW. amazing. I really like this story. Its written REALLY well and the plot is great. It just pulls you in and wont let go. I really hope you will write more soon, because I really want to know what will happen next!!
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