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By : NymphetamineFixed
  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2008
    Just came by to see how the story was going and saw it wasn't up.
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  • From ANON - Crow on September 15, 2008
    Thank you, Thank you for updating. I wasn't really a fan of Bellatrix/Hermoine pairings until this story. I just got me to thinking and now I love it! I hope the mood strikes you again soon. I know i'll be here.

    ~Crow~
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  • From lisanoortje on August 05, 2008
    Wauw i'd love to know how the story goes furter!
    Please please go on with the story :D
    I really love this story!
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  • From ANON - addicted2music on July 24, 2008
    Ah! THIS IS AWESOME! Update please! I've never read a harry potter fanfic this good! Don't leave us with that cliffhanger!!!!
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  • From ANON - addicted2music on July 02, 2008
    Hey. Kind of disappointed that not too much happened but I suppose it's just building up to the good parts! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for us! :) keep them coming!
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  • From ANON - Mags on June 30, 2008
    This chapter was fine. It brought into light a few things. The fact that Bella is more mesmorized by Ava then she first let on. Of course Narisca showing up in this chapter was interesting, as was the flirting on Bella's part. Which will always creep me out. Not one for Blackcest. As for Malfoy I worry about his role in this story and what will happen if Ava(Hermione) ever asks Bella for help with the fact that she just automaticlly answers questions without actually knowing the real answers for them. Looking forward to reading more whenever you can put it up. I look forward to reading if Arian has anything more to do with the story.
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  • From goldentrio on June 30, 2008
    Firstly, I just caught up on all 7 chapters of this story and I am really enjoying it so far. :)
    The pairing is unique and the way you write both Bella and Hermione is captivating, I honestly can't wait for the next chapter.
    I love the whole idea of Lucius and Bella competing against each other, that is so their character because they're both arrogant.
    Overall your idea is very intriguing and it's so hard to find well-written femslash that isn't trashy, so kudos!
    Can't wait for more!
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  • From todraw13 on June 21, 2008
    i hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - LT on May 19, 2008
    Great story so far! You've done a wonderful job on maintaining the characters' personalities. I can't wait for more. This is one extremely interesting fanfic. Can't wait for Hermione to get back... Wonder what will happen between her and Ginny. Update soon and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - SilverLioness on May 10, 2008
    I really love this story, you have to finish it soon. Please?
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  • From ANON - Melissa on May 04, 2008
    Awesome story. You dont get a lot of Bella and Hermione stories but this one i can tell is going to be a fav of mine.

    update soon please.
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  • From ANON - kadajclone on May 03, 2008
    so...ya gonna finish this, its pretty good

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  • From ANON - Mags on May 01, 2008
    Glad to know that I wasn't so off base. This chapter was better then I imagined. Their conversation was perfect for their characters, in my opinion, and the spell that Albus/Snape used sure is working. I was happy to see that Snape has made his appearance and that Malfoy was shown who was boss by Bella. I'm really looking forward to how things progress through the story and when all that promises smut begins to grace the chapters. Though I have to admit I'm more so looking forward to seeing what Malfoy might do in retaliation and if he follows her orders to stay hands off with Ava. Not that I think Ava would fall for Malfoy's charms at all...but its a thought to think about. Always looking forward to reading more. Please come back when you can.
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  • From ANON - Molly on May 01, 2008
    This is a great story. Looking forward to seeing how it turns out.
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  • From ANON - anon on April 19, 2008
    Really liking where this is going, can't wait until more is written. I've never read a Bella/Hermione fic before, but I'm hooked already, regardless of whether those two get together or not. I liked the banter of the last chapter.

    One caveat I do offer is not to make Ava too perfect. She needs to have some character flaws and growth, otherwise she'll come off as a Mary Sue.
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