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Reviews for Shock Treatment

By : AeroCherry
  • From CarlaRush on March 06, 2008
    I disagree with your assesment that this chapter felt a bit forced. The whole story was set on the premise of a time scale (day one altered wardrobe....)so this chapter is fitting in quite well.
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  • From CarlaRush on March 06, 2008
    I loved it last chapter when Hermione told Severus off the way she did, definatly made a 'stand out' point for this story. I did see 2 typos in this story it should have been 'her chest' not 'he chest' and he servived a war, not a ward. Don't feel bad, I do this a lot myself. So far I am enjoying this story very much!
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  • From catysmom1028 on March 06, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From dannilawless on March 06, 2008
    I'm loving the pure sluttiness of it all. (dunno if tats a real word but it is now)
    ROLF
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  • From DB1 on March 06, 2008
    @8 hot chapter, update soon

    *DB*
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  • From dannilawless on March 03, 2008
    Loved It!! God Golly Gosh, the new brazen Hermione is really swell!! (I spent the weekend watching beach-boyesk movies LOL) poor sev. Its an easy decision really as if an older man who turn down hot young ass! LMAO!!
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on March 03, 2008
    That was a great chapter! Hermione and Lily really do seem a lot alike. I wonder what will happen. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Cara Sky on March 02, 2008
    Great work! To be honest all I was expecting was some PWP but this new chapter certainly adds new dimensions. I think HG/SS just can't be thrown together in less than three chapters and I'm glad to see you're going to develop a deeper, more realistic relationship with them. I hope their sexual relationship will be realistic too, because even though Hermione has a new found confidence and Severus finds her sexy, they're not just going to start fucking like Ginny and Remus.
    I think I got a little ahead of myself. I just really think this story has great potenial and I would hate to see it ruined by a hasty fuck like most of these stories go.
    -Cara
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  • From catysmom1028 on March 02, 2008
    I like it. Please udpate soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 29, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From DB1 on February 28, 2008
    @6 great chapter update soon

    *DB*
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  • From Jocelyn25 on February 28, 2008
    That might be because your writing is simply fabulous :)

    And yes, though i do agree that at times it did feel a bit forced, the actual kissing was breath-taking !

    I cant wait for more :) Once again i go to bed hoping to find a new chappie up when i wake up in the morning *G

    Love
    Jocy
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  • From goofball on February 28, 2008
    *chuckle* I must have a weird sense of humour but I can so relate to this feeling of saying "oh shit" after a great kiss.
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on February 28, 2008
    Woot another great fic from you! I loved A Seaside Retreat and this one looks just as promising! Please update me when you add another and future chapters!

    Great work keep it up!
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  • From dannilawless on February 28, 2008
    Excellent!! I loved the wanton-ness of Ginny! Keep up the good work



    P.s. Strange question but are you irish?? I just got the feeling whilst reading your A/N.
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