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Reviews for Harry Potter and his Ultimate Adventure

By : Vegito786
  • From ANON - Spop103 on June 04, 2015
    This is a great story so far please update.
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  • From ANON - SilverStorm on September 26, 2012
    This story is brilliant! I love it, please update soon! Could you please send an email to silverstorm1@hushmail.com whenever you upload a new chapter? Thanks :)
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  • From snichol98 on November 19, 2010
    So far I really like this story--I hope you do more chapters--I would even proof them for you if you wanted.
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  • From shanesdragon on March 18, 2009
    i want more update plaese
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  • From Bloodsrose on June 28, 2008
    I ONLY found out that you intend this to be a CrackFic through your responding to reviews. That's really something you should put in the summary. Because I went into this thinking it was supposed to be a serious HP fiction and its just so ridiculous.

    I couldn't even make it past the second chapter. I was trying to follow you but the second all these possible wives showed up, I gave up. However, none of that is really important since this is supposed to be CrackFic.

    However, I'd strongly suggest that you place CrackFic in the summary and move this over to 3somes/moresomes for sure. Because Harry and his harem of wives-to-be just doesn't fit in the Harry/Hermione category.
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  • From jfitzgerald236 on March 07, 2008
    Please update again soon. THanks.
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  • From ryzmah on March 05, 2008
    okay I really debated on if I should review or not. First you need to learn how to take critism. It is pretty obvious from your response to some of the reviews that all you want is for people to praise your work. That isn't realistic, it isn't possible to please everyone.
    Next I have to say that I agree with the negative reviews. Your story is painful to read. In fact I couldn't get past the third chapter. Everyone is so out of character and shallow. It doesn't matter if you are working off the book or movie universe, there is no way that Harry would be happy being with girls who only want him for his stardom and/or for his money.

    In closing a bit of advice. One if you don't want people to read this as a serious fanfic than you might want to lable this as a crackfic. That way people know going into it that it is meant to be over the top/spoof. Second you should seriously consider moving this to the threesome/moresome catagory.
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  • From Vegito786 on February 29, 2008
    This isn't meant to be a serius Harry Potter fic, I'm just writing it for fun, that's why I decided to go a little too on top
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  • From AtlanVIII on February 29, 2008
    well i really liked your story until harry was presented with the number of his wifes ok could have lived with that too maybe but after that you really started to overdoo it

    sorry as i said i really liked the start but its to much wealth and all you are presenting harry with


    also that the fiances all are without anyting ready to marry him well a little bit strange

    dont to mention is castle and all

    all that rooms sound like heaven for any 16 year old muggle but well they dont seem to fit into the hp universe and after all are to much




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  • From WaywardSon on February 28, 2008
    Good update, a bit short but good none the less. Your keeping the story moving and I really wonder what twist or turn will come up next and how in the world is Harry going to deal with 9 women(LUCKY BASTARD) when they return to hogwarts and what other types of training will they undergo aside from what you have mentioned. Plz Update. CHEERS!!!
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  • From Vegito786 on February 26, 2008
    I'm sorry I had to delete the heir of ancients, but I shall contine writing this fic and my other one, sorry once again
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  • From angelnomiko on February 26, 2008
    wow that was awsome ... please please more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From WaywardSon on February 25, 2008
    NICE. My My Does Harry Have his work cut out for him, But Still he's truly living the Good Life, PLZ update soon I would like to see how far this goes. CHEERS!!!
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  • From Vegito786 on February 24, 2008
    Are you stupid or something? I bet you've never even read any of the Harry Potter books just watched the movies and
    think you know everything about it, I have gave the story more sense than some of the other stories and yet you have the balls to say something like this to me, save some money up and go and get the Harry Potter collection then read it in detail and then you'll understand where I'm coming from.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2008
    I suppose you will simply delete this review as you did with my last one.
    You have many ideas and although I loath anyone who even considers to make Dumbledore look bad, I feel that the plot can be interesting if given thought.
    In your case, you did not give it enough thought.
    It's just not good enough, sorry.
    They're all OOC and. Oh well, no need for me to ramble.
    Read the books twice and see where that leaves you.
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