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Reviews for The Fool, the Emperor, and the Hanged Man

By : moirasfate

From Camryn31 on May 20, 2008
another brilliant chapter
caaaant wait how this is going to turn out.... so excited...
keeeeep updating :)
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From PolarMouse on May 19, 2008
I wanted to let you know that I've been lurking at this site for a while but I love this story so much that I had to make a profile to tell you. I have especially enjoyed the story this past week as it has been a rough week and my favorite couple got together just when I really needed something to cheer me up. If you add up the multiple updates in the last week and all the yummy Dramione, you've made me a very happy person! :) Keep up the good work.
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From Izzi on May 19, 2008
I thought it was impossible to write anything as good as "Out of the silent planet". I was wrong!!! Your story is once again - amazing. I love you for updating so regularly:)
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From poepoedawn on May 18, 2008
Wow! That's all I can say. Wow. I can't wait till the next installment to see how the final confrontation works out between Hermione and Harry. It's certainly going to be interesting to see what you do with it. Good job. Keep up the good work.
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From blondpierogi on May 18, 2008
Wow, I gotta say i am drawn to this story more and more. I Love reading this story, it is one of the best. Every time I see that a new chapter has been posed, I squeal like a little girl with excitement . Great job and please keep up the awesome work. Cannot wait for another chapter!!!
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From distinctlyME on May 17, 2008
Wow...God that doesn't even seem to describe how I feel at the moment.

You amaze me more and more as the story goes on. I love that I never know what I'm going to expect and come out loving every twist and turn you put in there. I am so beyond enthralled with this story.

I pride myself on not being one of those woman who cry over the silliest or smallest things, like decorating shows(it's been known to happen...my mother bawls. haha) or books I'm reading. I guess because I feel so silly crying over something that's not real. But the beauty of Draco's words. To happy Memories, and the beauty and sexuality of the last scene, had me tearing up. Their need, their raw emotions, just everything we know them to be feeling and more was radiating of the page, and it was so incredible, and so pure and honest, and sweet.

I continue to be impressed with your story. I really hope another update doesn't take too long.
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From distinctlyME on May 17, 2008
Wow. I come on to see TWO chapters are up. Definitely was excited. I was going to just review in the next chapter once I read it, but I couldn't. This chapter was unbelievable. I am so, I barely have words. It was everything I've been waiting for. I love Beltane now hehe. I love Lucius. He's still the rough edges Lucius we have known from the books, but in your story he has so much heart, and I love that.

Thank you for this story and this chapter. It's a treat in my drab life.
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From smmz79 on May 17, 2008
hmmmm this is very interesting.... the way you write has me longing to keep reading but as it is 530 in the morning and I have yet to go to bed..... hmm i may peek at the next chapter.....
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From risotto on May 16, 2008
Woot, another update. Happer memmories indeed, as long as they can relive them in the end.
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From skyler on May 16, 2008
I have been following this story a month ago and Merlin! you sure know how to write an extremely captivating tale. I was glued in my computer when I first found this story and I have never regreted the time I spent devouring this amazing universe you created.

I admit I've seen this around and I never paid attention to it since the title I find is not too catchy. I have read your previous work and that was impressive. I thought you sure cannot top that. Boy! how wrong I was.

I have never intended to register in this site, vowing to lurk forever but when I came across your story, I have to tell you how I feel when I read your work. Your story acted as the catalyst that made me finally register.

The early chapters are painstakingly hard to swallow considering I am die-hard fan of Harry. Its really difficult to hate him, as the story progress I have to re-think my stand. Harry is EVIL. I was a bit on denial but when he raped and semi-butchered Hermione, that cemented my hatred of him ( er..in this story, of course!) He is totally psychotic. I shudder everytime Hermione and him cross paths. I am not looking forward to their eventual confrontation. I already accepted that he needs to die but at the same time I feel sorry for him. Harry is deadset in un-doing the past, screw anyone who go against him.

Although I have surmise the Draco and Hermione love story, I am glad that it was a gradual build up of feelings and familiarity. Its sweet and it somehow healed Hermione of the horrible ordeal she went through with her best friend. That scar shouldn't prevent her from creating happy memories.

I am bursting with too much excitement everytime I see a new update. Thanks for creating this and sharing it with us. I look forward to more enthralling chapters as the story unfolds.

Cheers!
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From Camryn31 on May 16, 2008
Let me be honest with you:
This is, without question, the best story I have ever read!!! I don't say things like that often, but it is PERFECT. I can think of no weak point, no flaws... You're style is far better than J. K. Rowlings and you're story is like the 8th book, that never existed but I have always wanted to read. You think of everything in your plot... your whole sotryline is complete with nothing that doesn't really fit together... You really write beautifully and - to my amazement - it isn't even that OOC, which I think is always the most diffidult part in Draco/Hermione stories.
I have to say, I've never read a Dark!Harry fic before... And at first I was a bit suspicious... but, like everything else, it fits totally in the story. Why wouldn't he get mad after everything he went through??!
The fic really is darc at some points, but the little scenes you write about Draco and Hermione, not even the "making love"-part... but the picture you describe...like them, sitting on a bench near the window... them, hugging... it really makes my heart ache (I know it sounds corny, but it does... I want a Draco too!! ;) )
So, i think i wrote everything i wanted to say. Sorry I didn't review earlier, but I just found your fic 2 days ago and I was very eager to finish reading all the chapters there are...
I really hope you update soon, because this will be my priority, first thing to check on every morning (Pathetic, I know...)
I don't know what else to say.... Wonderful!!!
Cam xx
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From poepoedawn on May 15, 2008
Hi! First let me say that I normally don't favor the darker fics, but the summary for this one intrigued me for some reason. I was not disappointed. I have read the story through so far and I have to say I can't wait for the next chapter! You have done an excellent job with the plot and the depth of the characters. Having Karen as a beta doesn't hurt either. She's a godsend! I should know since she is also my beta for my fic. Hope to see a new post up soon!!! I'll be waiting on baited breath....
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From risotto on May 14, 2008
Woot great chapter.
So now, hopefully, Hermione will finally go back to the past and ..kill harry potter finally?
Though meeting Snape in the past would be very interesting.

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From distinctlyME on May 13, 2008
I have many a favorite story throughout the Draco/Hermione fan fiction, and then I began to read yours. I was transfixed. I have read it since about the third chapter, and each time I come on to see if anyone has updated anything I like or anything new I am always beyond disappointed when I don't see The Fool, the Emperor, and the Hanged Man in the running.
I think your writing style is beautiful, you definitely have a remarkable way with words.

I love how you haven't rushed hem into being anything. I love how back and forth they are. How one moment he's romantic and chivalrous and the next his back to being the prat Draco Malfoy we all know and love.

I really hope you don't take this long to update again. I would love to know more of the Beltane traditions.

Isn't Beltane the name of the centaur Narcissa mentioned was living within the forest of Malfoy Manor?
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From risotto on May 13, 2008
Damn, after reading chapter 17.....
When is the next update? :)
you keep me wanting for morre
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