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Reviews for Another Kind Of Magic

By : goofball
  • From Leentjef on March 11, 2008
    this was very very good story
    please keep writing and post
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Moi on March 09, 2008
    Hi!
    Would you care to translate "Another Kind of Magic" and publish it at fanfiction.de ? I really loved your story, it's written quite sensitive. :)
    Cheers,
    Heidi
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  • From KarenLioncourt on March 08, 2008
    *grin* Very instructive. I like it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 05, 2008
    Thats a great story. Really funny and sweet at the same time. I really enjoyed reading it.
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  • From KillingProphet on March 04, 2008
    Thanks to you I spent about five good minutes trying to get Transvestite From Transsexual Transylvania out of my damned head. I love RHPS Richard O'Brien is a genius, every time I see him I think of Lucius Malfoy and I have no idea why. lol. You are right though a mindfuck is the most pleasurable thing ever.
    I swear if anybody has a mindfuck down to an art it is my Sir. He can say something so casual or rest his hand a certain way and my body and mind goes into high alert and he will keep me that way for HOURS... -Sigh- But that is the best way for it.
    I think besides ya know the obvious fun that you get having somebody order your dinner for you tell you when to take a bath or eat or go to bed is the best thing in the world. It is nice to not have to worry about any of that when he is here and we slip into Domn/Sub mode. If it wasn't for him I would probably waste away in front of my books. Nobody really understands how nice it is, or really how HARD it is not to argue when they tell you to do something you don't want to do, but then in the morning you are so happy that they made you go to bed instead of just reading one more chapter of your book because you know you have no control to stop and having the required eight hours of sleep is nice.
    I really like that you showed people a certain aspect of BDSM that nobody else really sees.
    Sorry if my review is to long I get carried away. I guess it is just that idea that my Sir will be down in a week and I am excited.
    KP
    Looking forward to your next story. Oh and if you wouldn't mind I would really appreciate if you would review my story called Sadistic Sir and tell me what you think your opinion would be greatly valued. It's in the original section.
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  • From anniea on March 04, 2008
    no fair i want more update soon *kisses*
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  • From ANON - jean on March 04, 2008
    thank you, i enjoyed this story greatly and look forward to more.
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  • From yaoified on March 04, 2008
    wonderful! very smexy!
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  • From Jan on March 03, 2008
    Fabulous story. I loved every moment of it.

    And what's this.... Oh my! You didn't learn BDSM from a book?
    Does this mean that you learned it up close and personal?

    Interesting!!!!

    ^_^

    Great work!!!

    Jan ^_~
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  • From ANON - A. Johnson on March 03, 2008
    Good story!
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  • From greenwizard11 on March 03, 2008
    This isn't a pairing I usually get into, but it was good. I think you should add at least one more chapter where they get into the hard stuff.

    There are a few things you could improve on as far as spelling and grammar. There were a bunch of small mistakes that could be taken care of by a good editor. And no offense to your beta, most of them were common mistakes that a lot of people make and miss. I myself like to have more than one beta because one will catch something that the other didn't, and vice versa.

    The other thing I noticed was short paragraphs. You branch off into a new paragraph when you don't need to, which makes your paragraphs very short and choppy.

    But all in all you get a thumbs up from me. I enjoyed your story, and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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  • From Nikte on March 03, 2008
    OH LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing it, and for showing the other aspect to BDSM that most people don
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  • From katecooley on March 03, 2008
    OOoh, I'm sad to see this end! It was so good! Great work!
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  • From aldis1986 on March 03, 2008
    A mental mindfuck can be nice is the quote, and it comes from the movie The rocky horror picture show.... i like the way you think, and i love your story.. can't wait for more...
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  • From PantherRain on March 03, 2008
    Very well done. As a dom myself, I was pleasantly surprised when I found that it wasn't mindless sadism, but an in-depth look at such a type of relationship. So many stories are just mindless pain and angst when it comes to sado-masochism. It is good to see someone so familiar with it. Though I do wonder if it's just 'book'-learning or some of your own experience. ;) Either way, thank you for one of the most pleasant BDSM reads I've seen in a long time.
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