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Reviews for Eclipsed Moon

By : BleedingStarGoddess
  • From darkpyroangel06 on March 01, 2008
    *shudders* This was amazing, honestly. I love the broken thoughts, broken senses. When you're dying (I imagine) or in extreme pain (I know this for a fact), this is exactly what it's like. Senses are off, but enhanced at the same time. THoughts are jumbled, garbled, misleading, scary. Anything that sounds, looks, feels, seems comforting is something you will grab onto. I love the way you wrote this. I wish I could shake your hand or hug you or something. It's amazing! And I loved the fight between the other Alpha and Fenrir. Hunger caused the Alpha to do things it normally wouldn't, and Fenrir didn't kill him because of this. And because he needed to get Harry back to the pack. Killing the Alpha would take time. I liked it though. Still unsure as to whether Fenrir is wolf or human in these last two chapters; it's really confusing. Loved everything else though. GREAT fic, GREAT chapter. ~dpa06~
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  • From alleycat88 on March 01, 2008
    Excellent chapter! I loved the end how you made Harry's look. Brilliant...now what will Voldemort do when he finds out anout Harry? Can Fenrir keep him safe?
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  • From Flamesky on March 01, 2008
    *blushes* ur welcome! Loved the fever!Harry!prospective it really mounted up the tension and angst for me----and pokes Fenrir with his stupid whisper that had to make me stupidly shiver...*shivers* *g* Lol, so its starting, Harry's change...curious to see more! Update update! Yuuuuppyyy!
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on March 01, 2008
    YES...another chapter...HOORAY.
    And very well done too.
    I'm really loving this tale.
    I'm addicted and would like some more.
    ...please.
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  • From ANON - lizzieJ02 on February 29, 2008
    This is really good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2008
    i just added this story to my favorites list!
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  • From JaeJaeBlaze on February 27, 2008
    Very cool for a start. You gave us a feel for Harry's situation. Fenrir watching him was the kicker. I hope you have more, cause it really is a good start
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2008
    AWESOME!!! totally kick ass! this sounds like a vampire LV/HP that i read though. oh well! i like fenrir better! ^u^
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on February 25, 2008
    A great start...I'm hooked.
    And love to see what you have in your next chapter.
    I cant get enough of Fg/Hp.
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  • From anniea on February 25, 2008
    looks good please update soon *kisses*
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  • From KagetsuAsame on February 25, 2008
    What a great start, I look forward to seeing what's going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 25, 2008
    I think you should focus on this story... I love Fenrir/Harry fics!
    update
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  • From alma on February 25, 2008
    A very good start.
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  • From ANON - curly88 on February 25, 2008
    I am so glad that another story of this pairing is posted. Please continue I am interested on where this will go.
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on February 25, 2008
    Looks like it will be good! Intriguing start!
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