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Reviews for Eclipsed Moon

By : BleedingStarGoddess
  • From Narius on February 25, 2008
    I really like this. What really struck me was the line, "Such thin shoulders you have," as if Harry's shoulders had been worn down by shouldering expectations, the burden of the prophesy and Voldemort's resurrection. That the only one to find him would be Fenrir Greyback is almost pathetic though, and already speaks loads of his current relationship with the other Light side members. Will you delve into Harry's relationship with the others or will it be solely focusing on Fenrir and Harry's relationship?

    I also like how intuitive and protective(?) Fenrir is toward Harry. It's just so perfectly done.

    I can't wait to read more. XOXO.
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  • From ANON - Charlie on February 25, 2008
    Harry waking up to a nightmare.
    I love it.
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  • From myniephoenix on February 25, 2008
    this is a good beginning tho. has me interested and it was pretty short. that's rare.
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  • From alleycat88 on February 25, 2008
    Oh now this sounds so good! I cant wait for more! I simply have become hooked n Harry/Fenrir but there are so few out there that I really like! You already got me hooked on this one!
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on February 25, 2008
    Very interesting. I love the broken Harry, and Fenrir sitting there watching him. I'm assuming it's Fenrir. It's a werewolf and Harry mentioned the Death Eaters. But you also said it was the full moon. Is Fenrir a werewolf right now? And how does he have him mental capabilities if he is? It's a great start. It seemed at the end that when Fenrir infected him, that Harry was very pissed off. I can understand why. He wanted die, not get turned into a werewolf. And from your summary, they'll be having a fight real soon. It's great, and I can't wait to read more. -dpa06-
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  • From Jan on February 25, 2008
    Wow! Very interesting start! You truly got my attention ^_~

    Please update chapter 2 soon. ^_^

    Jan

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  • From superluna on February 25, 2008
    I am french and I love the Harry/fenrir.

    I hope I will see your next chapter soon.

    A plus
    superluna
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  • From speedie234 on February 25, 2008
    I love this story! Update soon!
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  • From Flamesky on February 25, 2008
    Wooooooooooooooow-----Suicidal!Harry watched by an actual caring!Fenrir? *dreamy sigh* Sorta of an out of pity turning u into a werewolf thing--but still cool, I can see how that may cause friction between the two and i do terribly like it when they fight the on-coming attraction between them....But I do love my fluff dont get me wrong! Interesting start really, I'd be curious to read more...Understand more....Is it going to be a total AU or not...and why was Harry really so unhappy to kill himself? Why was Fenrir really there......? Lol! And the ust, can almost taste it im giddy lol! Deff deff cant wait for a next chapter!

    ....Oh and give it a go with other stories if u want. Like, personally i find it easier to focus on one idea at a time----but do write the basic line/plot/idea of it so u wont forget it! Nice start!
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