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Reviews for Dragon\'s Den

By : Panchat
  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2014
    More please!!!!
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  • From jreel08 on December 30, 2009
    Love the story so far. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From lovemalfoy11 on October 03, 2009
    update pleaseeee!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2008
    your spelling sucks
    i suggest a beta to fix the errors cos they ruin the story.
    some examples

    you use their instead of they're (as in they are)
    threw, this would be used to say 'i threw a ball', you should say 'they went through the fire'


    the story line is great though
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  • From kitryder on April 09, 2008
    i hope u can keep draco in his original charachter,i dont want to reAd fluffy draco.
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  • From eileenmilner on April 09, 2008
    Well all I can say is that your story is completely amazing. I love your Lucius, you've put
    your own stamp on all the characters. Look forward to reading more. Best wishes.
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  • From Tootsie on April 09, 2008
    Excellent+Amazing. Pls continue to the end and waiting update. Cheer!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2008
    I SWEAR I've read this somewhere before. This smells fishy.
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  • From on April 08, 2008
    WOW! this is an AMAZIN idea for a story n i cnt wait to read more!!!!! i never wld have thought myself to use dragons this way but im rly glad that u did. I def hope u update soon n im rly lookin forward to it
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  • From ANON - Sexy Relly on March 03, 2008
    nice story line, cant wait for an update
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  • From eveunitied on March 03, 2008
    Oh boy and here comes drama please continue i need to what will happen to Draco and Hermione. and not to mention Ginny.
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  • From hopelesslydark on March 01, 2008
    please update soon.
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  • From ANON - :) on March 01, 2008
    I like your story but two things are driving me crazy:

    threw = I threw the ball (past tense of throw)
    through = The ball went through the window (to pass by)

    your = That is your book (shows possession of an object)
    you're = I am happy to see you're posting (replaces and shortens you are)

    I hope this helps a little :)
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  • From starrynite45 on March 01, 2008
    keep updating!!! ahh i'm addicted to you!
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  • From chickaboo on February 29, 2008
    Uh-oh. This could be not so much with the good. I guess you'll just have to update again so I'll know huh? lol Great update! I can't wait for more!
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