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By : Clare1984
  • From ichiruki on February 27, 2008
    ok, it just struck me that he just ate "lunch" and my mind automatically assumed it was a sandwich, still...that said...lol Still pretty nonchalant if he knew all that time ;)
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  • From ichiruki on February 27, 2008
    LOL, well, yes roll out that second chapter! I'd also like to know if he could tell just by her state of dress, or if there was something else that gave it away. I mean how often does one suspect their co-worker of naughty lunch time activities? And how bold is that to sit there and eat a sandwich like nothing was amiss, if he knew all that time LMAO!
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  • From PotterEntourage on February 27, 2008
    OOOOHHHH Snap! You have got to continue this!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 27, 2008
    oh busted!!!! oh i loved it!
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  • From lilolme on February 27, 2008
    Hmmmm.... well now I'm intrigued. I would really like to see what happens next so plz add another chapter!
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  • From Starstruck456 on February 27, 2008
    oooh! please make a second chapter with them! i love it
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  • From ANON - Megan on February 27, 2008
    I was wondering...is this complete or is it going to be multi-fic? If it is complete can you possibly write a sequal?
    Thanks
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