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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From FallenAngel1129 on June 09, 2008
    nice chapters! im interested in seeing how herm. acts seeing as shes muggle born...
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  • From Mangacat on June 09, 2008
    Very nice exchange ... I really liked the traps Harry laid out for all the attackers!! And MAN were you mean to Lucius!!
    Keep going!!
    Cat
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  • From Nigellica on June 08, 2008
    Ron annoys me but at the same time I kinda feel for him.

    ANother awesome chapter I love teh detail and work you have put into your world, its incredible.
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  • From 70SolLaen on June 08, 2008
    Well the encounter between Harry and Lucius was unxepected, but interesting to say the least. The counter attacks against the breach were amusing, but the encounter with Ron was a bit saddening. Well, we shall see how Harry fixes this one. He's gonna need characteristics from all of his persona to solve this problem. I always believed that the persona were a part of Harry's real self, as much as he might not want to admit it, and they might have been "separate" from him in the beginning, but they are a very much a part of the person he is now, and if he ever comes to term with that, that's be nice, if not, well it's your story, you manipulate the plot how ever you want. Great chapter, I await the next one with anticipation.
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  • From ANON - Lola on June 08, 2008
    Ok I've been lurking for a while and decided I should say thanks for writing this, and for keeping up on the updates. I'm really enjoying this. The characters seem real, and have murky motivations. Keep it up!
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  • From Lunatichero on June 08, 2008
    Draco unfortunately hasn't gotten deep enough in there to completely notice when a different version of Harry comes in to play,
    but we can definitely hope that he'll catch the signals soon. As much as I love Harry's ability to be his own population, it will become
    both an emotional block and a step against the rebellion, if Draco discovers he's lying to him. It will create distrust inside of their camp,
    and if Draco and Harry aren't unified, then it will be hard for anyone else to turn to them for guidance.
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 08, 2008
    It's odd that Ron can still be this blind when his best friend is gay.... Where's Hermione in all of this?
    This chapter was crazy good. As soon as Harry Apparated off, I knew Lucius' gestures were signals to the rest of the groups.
    Awesome writing!
    update!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 08, 2008
    about #36...

    Of ALL the things I imagined, I never imagined a conflict where 'non-violent'
    violence would be used.

    Personally, I liked how Harry handeled the Aurors, because of the simple fact,
    I thought it was going to get ugly AND personally, I think I've gotten kind of
    tired of the age-old, free-for-all conflicts between protagonists & antagonists.
    [Hope those were spelled right...]

    That is for the time being, blame it on reading TOO much fanfiction with TOO many
    similarites.

    Now, I KNOW for a fact, Lucius was using a non-verbal spell, that sneaky, tricky
    snake!!! Man, I can't wait until you tell us what it does!

    Oh, by the way, let there be dancing. :-)


    PS- no love triangles, huh? Darn... :-/ I'll think of something else.
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  • From avihenda on June 08, 2008
    yay! another chapter! :-) Thanks
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 07, 2008
    forget about the chapter [35]...I GOT AN IDEA!!! :-D

    Something in this chapter triggered an idea I haven't seen you do yet.

    Have you ever thought about doing a story where someone DID come
    between Harry & Draco and was a threat against their relationship???

    I bet you haven't!!! *cackles wildly* HAHAHAHAHA!!!!


    ..oh, and I suppose you want a comment on this chapter. :-]
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 06, 2008
    Ack! Lucius just showed up! Where is he getting his info from??
    Great chapter. Loved the emotion.
    update!
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  • From Yume111 on June 06, 2008
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  • From magentah on June 06, 2008
    Forgot to add: I am exceedingly happy that Harry is realizing that Harry Potter is just as good a person and worthy a persona as the rest of them. Good! It's about time! Now if he would just stand up for himself instead of sympathizing with Jerkface Nusante, all would be well. (But if all was well, where would the story be? ;D)
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  • From magentah on June 06, 2008
    Jesus! Nusante is seriously pissing me off. He doesn't want his spotlight taken from him, but he won't get off Harry's back. Frankly, Harry Potter doesn't owe anyone anything. He killed Voldemort, which was his only obligation to the wizarding world. Every time Nusante spouts crap about Harry's efforts not being good enough, I want to reach into my computer screen and throttle the man.

    Don't get me wrong--your portrayal of the character is excellent; if it wasn't, I wouldn't be able to get so angry. Still, if someone could maybe beat some sense into him, I would be much obliged.
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  • From Mangacat on June 06, 2008
    I'm still full on in with Draco on Nusantes ass.. but we've got more pressing issues at the moment, what with Lucius standing there and how he'll react to Harry's inquiry!! But finally Harry's found something to like about himself, so no hiding and lowering anymore!!
    Cat
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