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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - fallenangel1129 on May 25, 2008
    YAY!!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 25, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 32! Kingsley is going to arrest Harry if someone tells!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 24, 2008
    about #31...

    Okay my first & ONLY reaction to this was...''OH...MY...GOD!!! He did it!!!''

    Harry Potter FINALLY came out of hiding to face the world, much less the public.
    Now, let's see what his so-called friend, Ron, thinks and I know fo' sho' you're going
    to give us an 'invigorating' conversation between those two. Personally, I would
    like to see Harry give Ron a piece of his mind..and NOT regret he did.

    That is I HOPE you do, because it's about time that Harry 'let him have it'!!!
    Not only that I'd like to see Pansy's reaction. :-)

    Sooo, does this mean as Harry begins to come to term with this part of himself that
    he kept hidden for so long, we won't be seeing much of his inner voice? :-)
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  • From ANON - Sol on May 24, 2008
    I'm truly speechless!! Though there is one word I can force out: MOREEE!!! So love the milking, more milk please(though the current amount is just perfect)!!!
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  • From ANON - Alexiad on May 24, 2008
    I really enjoyed this chapter a lot! I cant wait until I get to see more of Harry and Draco's reactions to this particular gesture (not to mention the reactions of the bystanders).


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  • From X5927alpha on May 24, 2008
    YAY! YAY YAY YAY!
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  • From Mangacat on May 24, 2008
    Oi.. what a tremendous finale, I can't even describe how I felt reading thes last scene, You really got me again. No comment..
    Cat
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 24, 2008
    HOLY CRAP!
    It finally happened! And it took the possible/imagined threat of losing Draco to do it.
    Ack! I was on the edge of my seat during the final scene. Such a great chapter.
    I loved how Draco felt free enough to open about himself more during his speech. I loved that Harry decided to do the same!!! Now all Harry has to do now is open up about his 19th year to Draco...
    I can't imagine what the Wizarding World will do now... Will Kingsley bring Harry in for his now open connection to the rebellion? What will the Ministry do now? Will Lucius revoke the disowning of Draco?
    update!!!
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on May 24, 2008
    wow! Harry's really brave to come out like that in front of everyone.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 24, 2008
    Beautiful, beautiful chapter. My favorite so far. The way you made Harry and Draco so courageaous in front of everybody was so exhilarating. I loved it , absolutely loved it. And finally! Harry drops all of his masks and admits he's with Draco!

    This was definitely a very powerful chapter. I can't wait to read the next one :) Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 24, 2008
    BEST CHAPTER YET IN THIS STORY!!!! You know why? Because you made us struggle, cringe, hope, fear, and wait for it just like Draco and Harry have....I am literally crying right now. I KNEW Harry was gonna come out as Harry when he hinted at it with Nusante, but the build up and the inner dialogue and revelation that Harry had to work towards to finally drop the mask was BRILLIANT. I haven't really cried like this from reading a story in a long time. This was so well executed and just satisfying on so many levels....for Harry most of all, but for Draco, what an affirmation of their love and Harry's commitment to him! and finally for the movement! they have a triple threat now...Nusante, Draco and Harry.....I'm so happy right now...nothing you could write after this would be a disappointment because this moment was just that damn special for me. Thank you Lomonaaeren, and I change my mind, this is your best story, and that's saying a LOT considering who you are as a writer.
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  • From Lunatichero on May 24, 2008
    Woot! Go Harry. He plays a surprisingly believable woman. I mean, I knew he could, we've met Elizabeth before, its just that the mannerisms in this chapter really brought it home. I have an eensey soft spot for Blaise, its not big, and its not extremely cushy, but its soft. I just like his take it or leave it attitude. How is Lucius going to deal with the fact that he's disowned his son and at the same time angered and alienated 'the' Harry Potter. It will more than definitely be a shock. I look forward to the shifting rebellion,
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From spedwouthermedz on May 23, 2008
    omg i love this story lol is there a email list???? if there is plz add me to it mine is spedwouthermedz@yahoo.com :)
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  • From SParker on May 22, 2008
    about #30...

    The merciless voice chuckled in his head like a dragon catching a thief in its hoard.

    -was that a 'Hobbit' reference?

    oh, and at an attempt to be funny, Harry & the merciless voice should
    have their own little side story. It TRULY has a lot to say doesn't it? :-)

    As a matter of fact, that should be the title 'Harry Potter and the Merciless
    Voice'!!! It's a Great Read!!!

    Okay, I'll stop... :-)
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    ANYway, about the chapter, Horace Longbottom was brilliant and a wee
    bit frightening to watch Harry do. I was starting to feel like Draco, good
    Lord Harry was a bit TOO immersed, but I saw the reasoning for it. Didn't
    make it less disconcerting, BUT I saw Harry's side AND I saw Draco's
    point, of course the bit on Harry NOT sleeping with clients, when Harry is in
    disguise, was a little possessiveness on Draco's part.

    By the way, you wrote something in this chapter that triggered an idea, I don't know if you thought about this yet, but have you EVER considered doing
    a new persona for Harry, where he was imitating Draco's movement &
    speech?

    Because I get the feeling that's what Harry does, watch people and adapt their
    way of talking and moving as his own.

    Did you mention something like that once?
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  • From Yume111 on May 22, 2008
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