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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Mangacat on May 19, 2008
    Oh this was marvellous!! I can't begin to phantom then ingeniuity of the whole plot. But I'm slowly muddling through the whole mess alongside Draco who really doesn't get it yet, but is getting there. Well, on with then next chapter!
    Cat
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  • From Lunatichero on May 19, 2008
    They say that you should be careful when waking sleepwalkers, because if you do it too suddenly or you scare them too badly, they can
    resort to violence. I do not know if Harry will turn to violence, but a cornered heart is one that does not react healthily. I applaud
    Draco's drive to finally understand the territory he's working in, but if his shovel digs too deep in the wrong area, and Harry feels
    too threatened, there's no telling what could happen, not to mention, the tome of different people that Harry could hide in. If he chose
    to try,I do believe Harry could go where Draco couldn't find him, and never leave London. It is a dangerous thing to not be able to recognize
    someone so close to his heart. And Harry is so very much sleepwalking.
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 19, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 30!!! Some of his words? Who is he?
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 18, 2008
    That was a crazy chapter. I'm glad that Draco is making progress with Harry. I see the very present hint of what happened to Harry in his 19th year... I so want to know! But I do like the slow build up that you're doing. Your way doesn't destroy the integrity of the story.
    Great writing!
    update!
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 18, 2008
    Yes! Harry and his merciless voice for once were one....that was the real Harry talking...and Yay for Draco for taking this challenge head on and forcing Harry to face what he's doing. I LOVED Draco's lines in this chapter. they were pointed, sexy at times, and for once he laid all his cards out on the table. I'm glad he had to admit to himself that he had to be truthful with Harry if he ever expected to teach Harry to be the same. And how ironic is it that Draco's ex lover shows up but Draco winds up being the jealous one...of lovers that haven't even come into Harry's world yet. That was great! Harry did scare me a bit when he totally disappeared after recognizing his own jealousy. It's like he really vanished, and I don't really recall seeing that in this fic, even when he was Brian, he seemed conscious of being so, kind of like a dual consciousness. But as Longbottom in Diagon Alley he was really scary...I can see why Draco was freaked out. I can't wait to see how this unfolds and if Harry will keep merging with his merciless voice until he doesn't even recognize it as such anymore...I'd love for him to use that voice on his friends! And why was this conversation so sexy to me? Maybe it's Possessive!Draco that turns me on, but it got me just as excited as Draco, who by the way seems to be easily aroused by Harry, even when he's pissed, which is awesome. So what happened to Blaise? Is he coming back, will Harry's secret be revealed to him eventually? does he still have feelings for Draco? I guess we need to start the revolution now....I'm anxious to see where Lucius still stands on this issue, if things have changed and where Narcissa stands now as well. GREAT update : )
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  • From sanda on May 17, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From Nigellica on May 17, 2008
    Hehe I love the personas, I wish I could do that ^_^
    I can't wait for more!
    I might have asked this before but if you have an update list can I please be added? My email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com
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  • From Mangacat on May 16, 2008
    Well.. the confusion theme is one of the most endearing of the story and after you brought in a new star player, now, I'm sure it's going to get to new heights *g* I can't believe what you did to get Draco out of this situation, but it's barely ingenius!! And I like Horace, hopefully he gets another appearance. Also the scene with Ron was very crucial I think for the development of consciousness in Harry wanting to be free of obligated deceptions. Well, we'll see how that turns out!!
    Cat
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  • From ANON - s2kitty on May 16, 2008
    Wow, I hope Shacklebot didn't see Blaise kiss Draco cause then he'd use that outdated law again. I love that Harry has disguised himself as a Longbottom and Draco didn't even know it was him, then his reaction when he found out... I half expected him to jump Harry right there! Kind of a cliffie ending, but that is what keeps me coming back for more. :D
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  • From ANON - reader88 on May 16, 2008
    ah you're evil to leave it like that!
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  • From Lunatichero on May 16, 2008
    Oh Harry, you silly goose, how many times am I gonna want you to bust some heads on Ron when he says something slow, only to have you calmly
    accept it and make me believe that you did the best thing. Arg. I do find myself really liking Horace Longbottom, quite a lot actually, and
    I find it deeply disturbing how much I stopped thinking of him as Harry in those moments, even as Draco had trouble thinking of him as Harry
    and kept referring to him as Longbottom. There are so many layers left to dig through until Draco actually gets to the bottom of everything
    he needs to understand about 'Harry', that it may feel like the deception never ends. I do like that Draco just stopped underestimating
    Harry's ability to act, completely. Its about time he got those last lingering doubts about Harry's powers of deception out of the way before
    they got him into some larger trouble.
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2008
    Ron is the type of friend you could never count on.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 16, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 29! Sooo Kingsley isn't fooled by Harry's show of weakness. Interesting.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 15, 2008
    Whoa! Zabini is kissing on Draco like a lover? Were they? I smell trouble and another pawn in the game of love for Draco.lol. I totally understand Draco's apprehension, I mean how do you trust someone like Harry, that will be the test of whether he really loves him. And even if he does love him at what point is it healthy for him to work through this, and at what point is it best to set limits and walk away? I wanted Harry to smack Ron silly...I hope that's coming..or some version of it. It was genius how Harry rescued him as Longbottom, although I was disappointed he didn't go as Harry...I guess he's still not ready ::sigh:: I can't wait to see who the insider is..and perhaps the threat of a former lover will push Harry out of the closet completey? : ) Ughh... 3 more days?
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 15, 2008
    Another cliffhanger... you're getting way too good at those m'dear.
    Can't wait to see the interaction between Horace/Harry and Blaise. Will Draco try to flirt with Blaise? Wasn't Blaise with someone before? Why is he kissing Draco like that in such a public place?
    You would think that the Minister would want to check to see the validity of someone who was writing to him often. But I supposed he's too busy to look up the genealogy of the Longbottoms. Or too easily fooled, as seen in this chapter.
    Great chapter!
    UPDATE!

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