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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Yume111 on May 14, 2008
    Great as always.

    Are you going to go into what happened during the year Harry mentioned? Did something occur that went so deep that Harry decided he didn
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  • From ANON - Koneko on May 14, 2008
    OMG you HAVE to keep going with this. I absolutely adore it and I need to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Sol on May 14, 2008
    Wonderful, like always! I'm so waiting for the next chapter!! Please have mercy one me!:D Also, if I may, would you please please milk the Ron/Hermione versus Harry/Draco confrontation when they finally learn the truth(or at least part of the truth even if all is never revealed)? It would be so good, I'd love to see Harry put Ron in his rightful place.
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  • From Caldonya on May 13, 2008
    OOOOOh the plot thickens! Great two chapters!
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  • From Calrissian18 on May 13, 2008
    Not dwelling on or not dealing with? I don't like that Harry is placing mental barriers around memories that obviously effect who he is today (all of the people he happens to be) and much of his actions, especially if these suppressed memories are indeed the reason he formed Metamorphosis, whose name has taken on many different meanings for me. Well done with that! I worry about that boy and the facade he puts on for everyone around him, at least Draco's getting through... or so I like to believe. And at least an ally came out of Draco's arrest, but argh, I find the antiquated ideals of much of the Ministry and the wizarding world in general so indescribably infuriating as you have captured the somewhat prevalent bigotry flawlessly.

    I truly enjoy Hermione's character in this and am glad we've gotten a chance to see more of her and I do hope that Harry asks for her help. While she is not outright 'supportive,' she does seem to care for Harry and while that concern only seems to further alienate Harry's true personality from her, it's there and that's much better than Ron's character. I am truly beginning to despise him, his reactions to homosexuality are so incredibly inappropriate and I don't mean simply because it's idiotic. His 'best friend' is gay! Clearly Ron does not care about Harry at all, they're not 'friends,' they're not even acquaintances at this point. No one would overtly show their derision towards something a friend or an acquaintance happened to be a part of. Harry needs to sever ties with Ron and hopefully with Draco at his side he will be able to do just that. I love your Hermione but I cannot believe that she is dating such a pig!

    Well, fantastic update, as usual! Thank you for sharing and I hope you'll grace us with more soon!
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  • From Jan on May 13, 2008
    OMFG!!! How does he suspects Harry's involve?

    Could it be all the times that Draco keep calling him Harry instead of Brian?
    Is Harry going to find out that Draco's been arrested? If so, is he going to come to Draco's rescue as Brian?

    Please update chapter 28 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - hakkyou on May 13, 2008
    Oh my god what for a mean cliffhanger T_____T You're so mean! Please update in the next 10 minutes!!! xDDDDD otherwise you're responsible for my heartattack!

    I really love this story, your Harry & Draco charas are ecxellent written.
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  • From Mangacat on May 13, 2008
    It's endearing really, how Harry skits around the confession that it IS actually his own voice talking all the cues ... I think it's Harrys only real genuine voice in a way that all the others are not. they're part of of him sure, but not his innermost personality!
    Cat
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  • From sanda on May 13, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From X5927alpha on May 13, 2008
    Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo....post more! You can't leave it like that!

    Gah. Writers. *throws hands in air and walks away*
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 13, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 28!!! Why do they think Harry is involved? And why ask Draco?
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  • From Lunatichero on May 13, 2008
    Draco is in a bit deep it seems, so its a good thing that Harry's cut and run plan on the rebellion situation got turned
    away by a sudden epidemic of honesty, or he would have had an incarcerated ex Malfoy on his hands. I really am finding
    in myself a dislike for Ron and Hermione in this story, not really a dislike for them as people, but more for the willfull
    blindness they seem determined to showcase.
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 12, 2008
    A tease! You're a bloody tease!
    heh
    It would make sense for Lucius to be the informant, no? Argh, I want to know!!
    Why is Harry under suspicion? (well rumored to have been there but still...) I though Harry covered his tracks with changing his magical signature. Narcissa wouldn't have told the Ministry that Brain is Harry b/c she's loves Draco too much, and Lucius doesn't know that Brain is really Harry... right?
    Too many questions... but that's why I love this story so much... it keeps me on my toes!
    update!
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 12, 2008
    I can't believe this story is still getting better! The first part of it was an intriguing game of cat and mouse on a level I've never read in fan fiction between two people attracted to each other trying to win at their own game but now, this has morphed into a real psychological, social justice, and romance drama..it's like all three. And I'm loving Harry's war with his merciless voice or what I've come to know as the real Harry Potter. I agree with Draco, Harry's become too Slytherin for his own good. I LOVE Draco's thought: "I wonder if another of my tasks might be coaxing the Gryffindor side of him back to life". I was cheering when I read that part! Not only does it recognize that the beauty and talent of what Harry's managed to accomplish because of how it exemplifies character traits he holds dear but he loves Harry enough to take on the difficult task of rebuilding his original self, a person who's traits were very much not like the ones he usually admires. And it's true, where is the Gryffindor part of Harry....Hermione is gonna kick his ass when she finds out how he used her for information. He's making a lot of assumptions based on the reactions he sees from Ron and Hermione BUT he is partly to blame for their continued ignorance. He hasn't challenged their beliefs or their views and so they will go on being ignorant, which of course justifies his rationalization to keep lying to them. It's a cycle really and I hope he comes to see what role he plays in that. Of course, Ron should be held accountable for his bigotry and in this story I've come to loathe him and frankly I don't see how he can be redeemed unless he does a total 180. I wonder who this insider is who has suddenly gone tight lipped...I have no idea and I feel like I should..I hate that. And the rumours about Harry Potter being involved..were they put out there by Harry? I didn't know they had enacted that part of their plan yet, I thought that they were just discussing doing that. If it wasn't Harry who put that information out there, then I suspect that Narcissa has had a change of heart and is getting involved. I would love that. I can't wait to see Ron's face cracked and on the floor when he finds out Harry is shagging Draco and even better, he's in love with him. OK, rambling now...LOVED this update. You never disappoint : )
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  • From Yume111 on May 12, 2008
    That was great again.

    I love how in this chapter, as well as in the previous, it
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