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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

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  • From avihenda on May 07, 2008
    another great chapter. I loved this chapter! Hope you write the next chapter soon. Keep it up!
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  • From Mangacat on May 07, 2008
    What a beautiful chapter, I really can't describe it any other way!! What you did with those characters and the dynamics (seems to be a favoured word for me at the moment..) it's marvelous.. oh, I can see this going on for quite a few more twists!!
    Cat
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  • From Christabell on May 06, 2008
    This chapter was gorgeous. I always enjoy it, but here you showed so much more of Harry and Draco. The moment describing Draco's admiration and desire and intrigue in Harry's role as the entirety of Metamorphosis was just breathtaking :)
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  • From Calrissian18 on May 06, 2008
    Oh wow, you've done it again! I'm so happy. I loved this chapter! Favorite line: "Some of his personas were good with words, but he wasn
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on May 06, 2008
    chpt 25. great chapter. it's like some magical version of multiple personality disorder. I'm actually disappointed in Ron & Hermione. I usually love fics where they're like "the great trio" and they always stick 2gether. but their attitude does make sense w/ this fic, so im not really complainin'
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  • From Caldonya on May 06, 2008
    Wow Last two chapters were great it's interesting to see these different sides of Harry. Draco's sure determined but then I've always imagined he was.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 06, 2008
    about # 25...

    Man, I just want to stop and give Draco a standing ovation! :-) He handled Harry beautifully!

    He was perceptive enough to say the right things, while being firm enough to
    have Harry confess his complicated situation without backing Harry into that wall.

    Hopefully, this is what gets Harry onto the road of healing..and not being such
    a compulsive liar.

    Come on, you have to admit..Harry has been so MANY personas for so long that he can't
    help but spin so many webs of deceit, so lying is second nature to him.

    I just pray that Draco helps Harry build his own foundation and not be the
    foundation himself. You don't want Harry to become dependent on Draco, that would
    do more harm than good.

    *sigh* I just love talking about characters like they're real. Heh! :-)

    Last thing, how many more chapters are you seeing so far?
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  • From Lunatichero on May 06, 2008
    Its all well and good that Harry has given up the metamorphagus ghost, but Im not gonna feel relief till Draco has been made aware of that there reverse penseive. I won't do it.
    Forgive my petulance, I've been sick...childhood reversion.
    Thank You,
    Lunatic With a Hero Complex
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  • From ANON - s2kitty on May 06, 2008
    Oh. My. God. I literally can not stop squealing. I'm getting strange looks from other people. I am however wondering who the voice in Harry's head is. It was just such a perfect "I'm loved!" moment. I want to cuddle them so much right now. Of course they are still going to have to work many things out - how to deal with Draco's insane father for starters, and how to explain to Harry's friends about how he is now dating Draco - unless they as a couple continue to use the "Brian" mask in public so nobody knows, but I can't see Draco being satisfied with that as he does sort of want the world to know he is intimate with THE Harry Potter. He's too egotistical at his core to not too.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 06, 2008
    Harry's really opening up now... Maybe there's hope for him?
    update!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 06, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 26!!! Who is this voice? Does Harry have Multiple Personality Syndrone?
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  • From sanda on May 06, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 06, 2008
    That was really really deep. I'm a bit stunned actually. I was expecting the truth, but I didn't appreciate how much inner and external struggle Harry would be going through to get it all out. You really did an excellent job with his inner dialogue and Draco's own apprehension, wonderment, and desire as a result of it. Draco really is in love, and it's so awesome that he sees the beauty in all of Harry's personas, and that he's supportive of him continuing to play out all of these identities if only he's grounded in himself. That's real love right there, especially for a character like Draco who's most noteworthy characteristics are pride and possessiveness. Of course there's still a lot of that driving his lust for Harry but it's deeper than that. Most of the really deep lines were from Draco's thoughts and dialogue. LOVED that Draco recognized all of the personas as reflections of pieces of the real Harry. I LOVED Draco's lines about wanting Harry to give him a chance to find out his faults and prove himself trustworthy. I hope Draco doesn't really think that Hermione drove Harry to this or abandoned him, it's way more complicated than that I think. And while you did give another perspective on Ron, I still feel like he owes Harry an apology and needs to get checked! Love love love Harry initiating kissing Draco as himself and the pleasure he felt as a result of it. I just really liked this chapter..it was all angsty, introspective, and intimate the way real truth-letting should be between two lovers who're working towards something deeper than just companionship and sex. You've left me in a reflective mood. Thanks for that. AWESOME update...can't wait to see what this means for Metamorphasis, Lucius and his plans, Ron & Hermione, and Harry and Draco's future together. : )))
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 05, 2008
    about #24...

    Yeah, Harry got issues alright, now he's TRYING to rationalize the
    guilt his conscious is beating him over the head with..the poor man is so
    used to being other people , he's no longer comfortable in his own skin.

    Just basically using those disguises as a wall...to reuse a past term.

    I don't know, right know I'm having difficulty putting in words how I KNOW
    what Harry is feeling, because I've done it before..and so have others.

    To hide behind a wall, to keep others from hurting you. To stop being a
    scapegoat, because people take advantage of your niceness and feel they
    can slightly push you in the Direction THEY want you to go..and think you
    are just too stupid to realize what it is they are doing.

    To becoming a person that is aggressive, when deep inside you are really sweet,
    but people don't take you seriously when you are that way.

    Bottom line is the same...becoming other than what you are.

    Yeah, I know exactly how Harry feels. Difference is I didn't have a whole
    Wizarding World putting me under a microscope & watching my next move.

    It completely sucks.

    *damn, did I just ramble?... O_o
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  • From Yume111 on May 05, 2008
    This has been a very powerful and emotional chapter again, this time with tempers flaring.
    Their connection is such that even their fights, at their most vicious, have some beauty to them.

    I quite admired Harry in this chapter. He has a lot of inner strength and immense courage, even if it takes Draco and this extreme situation to bring it to the surface.
    It would have been quite easy for him to never face Draco again after his attack, without abandoning him, getting him treatment somewhere else. Doing this apparently never even crossed his mind. He reacts to Draco
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