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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - qwerty on April 21, 2008
    Jeez! That was pretty evil ending it right there; I'm not gonna lie.
    Glad that Harry will actually fess up (not that he can avoid now anyway...)
    Will Draco and Harry come out and say that this was their plan all along (to just test the waters first before plunging headlong as the almost Death Eater and the Boy-Who-Lived)?
    Great chapter
    update!!
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  • From kalaway on April 21, 2008
    OMG! Wow, usually those grand sprawling type scenes get rather corny, but this didn't feel that way at all! I loved every second of it. Please update fast!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 21, 2008
    FINALLY! Finally, finally, FINALLY!

    The moment of TRUTH!

    ...okay now that I'm done with my spazing, I'd like to say this was an amazing chapter. So much emotion and power. It was just beautiful.

    I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter. You just HAVE to update soon. SOON!

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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 21, 2008
    You are amazing!!! That was so beautiful, symbolic, and so fucking brilliant...the way you used their magical connection to convey their yearning, fear, memories, and passion...it was just really great writing really, but I shouldn't be surprised at this point. I never thought that it would be revealed this way but it was PERFECT for Draco to show Harry this way...and Draco crying, freaking crying during the sex was just so beautiful and so romantic in a old school sort of way. Everyone just wants someone to be that open to them and unconditionally accepting of them faults and all, and to have it done while in such a vulnerable position and in the throes of passion is just dreamy. I love that Draco was trying to picture Harry as Harry and Harry got to see that Draco longs for him to be him. I thought Harry was going to do something stupid for a minute there with the Oblivate spell:::whew::I'm so glad he didn't betray his true spirit and the chance of being loved and vulnerable for fear. I can't wait to see how this will change things...and I can't wait to see how the parents will react now that Narcissa no longer has a card to hold over Harry's head and I have no idea what Lucius will do when he find out his son is in love with Harry fucking Potter...lol. Please tell me that this will be enough to get Harry to throw that horrid pensieve thing away and accept that he can be Harry, be loved, and run his business..somehow, I know he's gonna find a way to make this more complicated than it needs to be. AWESOME update : )
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  • From Jan on April 20, 2008
    OMG! Will Harry find out that Draco knows it's really him(Harry and not Brian)? I can't wait!!!

    Please update chapter 19 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2008
    What a good ending to the chapter! That was really phenomenal writing. I hope that you have Draco seducing Harry soon! Even if that means letting him know that he knows "Brian" is Harry. A very exciting read!
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  • From Yume111 on April 18, 2008
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    Now that things have gotten complicated, what was effortless before has become slightly off between Harry and Draco. Neither of them is acting consistently in any way, it feels as if they had lost their balance all of a sudden.

    I liked the theater part, even though I found the harsh reactions from parts of the audience quite frightening. It must be an extremely self-satisfied, arrogant kind of society they are living in if they are so extremely fast to judge and attack anybody not conforming (it wasn
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 18, 2008
    Yay for Draco cornering Harry and force kissing him like that at the end ::::fanning myself:::: I LOVE this magical bond that they have, and I'm wondering if you're figuring that into the plot of all of this later. It's a new way to paint their connection and it creates a very powerful (and sexy) image. I'm curious about what Lucius's next move will be....he seems to continue to underperform to Draco's expectations or at least not conform to them. I kind of like that, it hints that even he may be more complex than he appears just like everyone else in this story. So glad to hear that Draco is just as confused as we are about what parts are Harry and what parts are Brian. I really liked this chapter because we see both of them losing control and struggling to regain it in their characteristic manner only to succumb to it again. LOVED Harry's effort to get all cool on Draco, that was some cold sh*t...but it didn't work did it? lol. As for the Auror bit, very interesting that as Brian, Harry may actually be garnering support and admirers, I wonder if Harry Potter could get even more support and if at some point he will emerge to galvanize the rebellion. Ok, I'll admit it, I just can't wait for Harry to come out, maybe hot monkey sex will do it!....AWESOME update, as always!


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  • From survivalinstinct on April 18, 2008
    no one does cliff hangers quite like you do.
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  • From shinythiefxblast on April 17, 2008
    Wow! I just have to say wow because Harry is like a puppet master at manipulating everyone but Draco,who he's actually trying to manipulate. If things continue this way (which i hope they do), then Harry will fall into the trap that Draco is setting for him. I love the idea of a confrontation between Harry and Draco when Draco decides to bring it up. Way to go! You've definatly have got me hooked! I can't wit for your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Missy on April 17, 2008
    this is one of those cliffy's that make someone just mentally go DUN DUN DUNNN!!! wouldn't you agree?

    I can't wait for the next chapter.. I wonder if Draco is now going to let Harry know that he knows his secret?
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on April 17, 2008
    Just a few exotic positions?

    ...Draco's got game ^_^
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  • From Calrissian18 on April 17, 2008
    "A lie mixed with the truth," that seems to be a main theme of this story as most every character either employs or advocates it. And the further I fall into this plot, the harder it becomes for me to recognize lies and truths for what they are. Draco's thoughts are so persuasive and I am trying desperately to separate my own from his, is Harry truly being reckless with his portrayal of Brian or can Draco only see, and distinguish, the signs for what they are because he already knows "Brian's" secret? I am finding it quite difficult to make the distinction between what I think and what Draco is convincing me to think, does Brian actually look so much like Harry that when his features are relaxed it should be obvious? I'm wondering if Draco is simply trying to feel less duped by telling himself he would have figured it out eventually. I love the constant insight you give into Draco and Harry's minds, they are both so complex and intense in every movement they make. I truly love this story and your depiction of each and every character. They are so personable even when they are trying not to be and even though their plans and actions pertain to something so convoluted and exotic, it still feels very relatable, and again, I attribute this to your wonderful writing of it. Thank you for sharing! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 17, 2008
    true, true about the canon criminals

    good chapter. I'm really interested in this intense magical connection that Harry and Draco have. How does it work? If your magic is really compatible with someone, does it automatically reach out? Since Harry and Draco have never felt this before, it's definitely something special... is it unique inly to them?
    update
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on April 17, 2008
    I hate cliffies ur evil, but i love the story.
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