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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - angelmuziq on April 11, 2008
    Loved Loved Loved this chapter! This story keeps getting better and better. I cant wait to see the interaction between Harry and Draco. I'm so glad that Draco didnt immediately fly off the handle when he found out he worked a lot of things out and I really like that. Please update as soon as possible I neeeed to see whats going to happen next. So complex its positively a maze and I loooove it.
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  • From throughvioleteyes on April 10, 2008
    Another great chapter. Can't wait for more
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 10, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 16!!!
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  • From ANON - Graballz on April 10, 2008
    *eyes lit up* OH MY GOD...that was SUCH a good chapter!!! Like, orgasm-good chapter, and there wasn't even any sex!!! I love love LOVE seeing inside Draco's head, and the way you did it...just AH! AMAZING! Definitely not the way I expected Draco to find out (well, honestly I had no bloody idea HOW he would find out, but sending a house-elf after him was definitely not on my "possibilities" list. But when you think about it, Harry sent Dobby and Kreacher to spy on Draco, so I suppose that payback's a bitch)

    Which, actually, could be the theme for this chapter! OH MAN! Payback's gonna be a BITCH!!! And I just love how Draco turns everything hugely complicated!!! (he's SUCH a drama queen, even if he doesn't act like it in this fic) It's like Juliet (you know, from Romeo and Juliet) who creates this horribly complicated, hair-brained scheme to get what she wants...of course, that particular plan backfired on HER, and I have every confidence that even if Draco's scheme backfires, it's not going to kill him...right?

    Ohhhhh, I'd LOVE an angsty suicidal-type Harry scene in which Draco rescues HIM and tells him he knows (and in my little fantasy world, 'everything's all better', but I know in reality that Harry knowing that Draco knows would probably just make Harry panic all the more...)

    Oh screw it, I'm going to love it no matter WHAT you do! Keep up the good work, darlin! You rock!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 09, 2008
    Draco acknowledge that the magical connection between him and Harry was undeniable and that Harry had to have felt that as well (which is one of the reasons why Draco plans to undercover which part of the disguise is really Harry and which part is Brian). But at the same time, Draco thinks that Harry was pretending to like gay sex, etc. Draco's smart; why does he think that the magical connection was real but Harry was faking the sex? Don't they go hand in hand especially since Draco and Harry had that magical connection during a very intense kiss?
    Great chapter. Well-written. Very intriguing. I'm anxious to find out what happens next.
    update!

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  • From Tesp71283 on April 09, 2008
    haha sorry i wasn't clear in my previous review. I guess i expected Draco to take the news better than Harry himself. I feel that drama that is going to rise is from Harry himself. I'm more excited about how the plot is developing than really whether or not Draco forgives him or whether or not Harry is disturbed. haha I'm excited about the journey rather than the end. and when i said NO mercy i meant it as in don't hold back on the plot and to go on at full steam. haha I know i'm horrible with explaining my reviews.
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  • From Christabell on April 09, 2008
    Harry is so fantastically flawed throughout this story, and I find that so refreshing. You give characters very believable depth, and I seem to always be left wanting to read more of your work :)
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  • From ANON - G on April 09, 2008
    It's good that the ultimatum has been shortened. I would really like to know what Brian's next step is going to be.
    I'm glad Brian's back to his confident self. I like that better.
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  • From daynajones on April 09, 2008
    I dead ass love this! I am following umpteen fics at all times and this is in a tie with Big Chicago for the number one slot, I really can't think of any higher praise than that.
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  • From Lunatichero on April 09, 2008
    Draco took that a lot better than I anticipated. True, he did destroy his living space, but he reasoned out a plan in the end, instead of just willy nilly destruction and confrontation. Of course what can I expect from someone who has spent a great deal of their life trying to look around corners, to see if anyone is watching him walk around them. There is a shiver that runs up my spine when I think about that reverse pensieve. Just to vanish into someone completely different forever, that is a heady and a terryifying thing. Harry better keep the habit kicked until Draco knows enough to stop him, that's all I'm saying.

    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From Ellanath on April 09, 2008
    NO! He can't become Brian!!! HE has to stay as Harry Potter! Gah! *you gotta update soon*
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 09, 2008
    what??? Oh no no no. I don't like that pensieve thing Harry's keeping locked up AT ALL! I hope he gets rid of it, or it gets destroyed. Now you're scaring me....I had a bright smile throughout most of this chapter. I was relieved that after Draco had his little temper tantrum he started rationalizing why he should make a play for Harry. I'm glad he understands how special the bond he and Harry share is....This is gonna be one mother of a mind f*ck for both of them, but I think Draco is definitely up to the challenge...I'm not so sure about Harry. As this story progresses, he starts to seem more fragile and unstable than I thought he was and definitely less than his persona Brian projects. I mean we knew that of course, but I guess until this chapter, I didn't know how much self-loathing, insecurity, and fear he was struggling with...the idea of killing yourself, which is exactly what he contemplates every time he reaches into that cupboard, to escape just being yourself is so unsettling to me. Most disturbing was that line about the mask he wears for Ron and Hermione....I had the impression that while he hid things from his best friends, he didn't necessarily consider it a separate mask, it's like even the Harry Potter he presents to him isn't really him. So then I'm left to wonder who the real Harry Potter is. Hopefully Draco can help him discover that...after much of the games are over of course. In the meantime, I'll be enjoying watching Draco go to work on him. I just hope he doesn't freak out or do something drastic before finding out someone is really willing to love him despite the mask of lies he's built for the world and himself. And boo-hoo Narcissa, that new deadline don't mean shit now, lol!! sorry, I kinda wanna watch her face get cracked when she finds out Draco is willing to love Harry as Harry and doesn't really care about losing Brian. I can't wait to see Lucius's reaction to this news....thanks for sharing the game plan with us, I think we'll need it to keep track of what's going on because this story is about to get really crazy!!! Great update!
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  • From ANON - Moyima on April 09, 2008
    Oh, now Draco will be a force to be reckoned with. I'm looking forward to seeing the boys face off! Nice job.
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  • From ANON - ladynightvamp on April 09, 2008
    I like it.. harry is in BIG trouble .. give him hell dray..LOL
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  • From Yume111 on April 09, 2008
    I loved the entire process of Draco
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