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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren

From Yume111 on March 19, 2008
This is so much fun to read!
Studied pure-blood manners within an inch of his life? Is that a reference to his "real" past, a joke he is permitting himself? In any case it IS very true.
I love Brian
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From ANON - Ladynight on March 18, 2008
So far I've liked all your stories to some degree. But this story is soooo good, I actually :Squeed: when I saw that it was updated.
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From ANON - heyjena01 on March 18, 2008
i really love this story cause it's totally how i see harry after the war.... at a loss about his own purpose and identity. i see harry a little more vulnerable than you have him. i am wondering if that is how you are gonna take him later on in the story perhaps when draco figures out who he is or maybe (and perhaps perferably in my own opinon) when he starts to fall for draco. i'd also be interested to know what this draco thinks of harry potter. it'd be funny if he talks about harry to "brian"... awkward.hehe
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From ANON - qwerty on March 18, 2008
Great chapter. I love this story! Can't wait for more!
update
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From anaxibia on March 18, 2008
This story was a pleasant surprise. Its been harder to find quality fic nowadays.
I love the premise and your characterization is very well done.
Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

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From LiveLaughLoveMe on March 18, 2008
Another good chapter! Hmmm Harry better becareful otherwise Draco's mom (couldn't spell her name) might figure him out.
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From Lunatichero on March 18, 2008
Again, a wonderful chapter, though I have come to expect nothing less. You have the most deliciously teasing way of revealing the actual substance of your characters. I find myself getting more interested and emotionally attached to the 'real' Harry as Draco finds more to please him in the steadily growing picture of Brian's personality. It is a rare state to be in the same affectionate basket with a character, and to feel much of the same suspense, and wonder, and I suppose a kind of intellectual tension, as though you were waiting to continue a conversation that you really enjoyed...
Oh well, I'm waxing poetic again....
Thank you,
Lunatic With a Hero Complex
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From SoftObsidian74 on March 18, 2008
mmmmm...that was simply....mmmmm....I need a cigarette or something. Wow Harry, who knew he was such a stud?? The whole time though, well, not the whole time, when it first started, I was thinking, I wonder how Draco would feel knowing that Harry Potter was doing this to him. I have mixed feeling about that. You wonder if he will feel violated. Can't wait to see what that revelation will bring. I would have loved to hear what Draco told Marigold, but I love what we did get to see, he basically slammed the door in her face, that's what she gets, lol. Loved the way Brian handled Lucius! lol. "we'll just have to have lots and lots of passionate sex!" lol. He better tell Draco how brash he was so they can prepare, I have a feeling Lucius is gonna get real nasty.
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From ANON - SP777 on March 18, 2008
about #6...

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From thrnbrooke on March 18, 2008
Sooo need chapter 7!!! This could get ugly! Good thing Brian doesn't really exist. Though I wonder if Harry really didn't tip off Narcissa.
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From DuckieSongbird on March 18, 2008
Hi! I think this is actually the first time I have reviewed one of your stories, though I think I have read most of the completed ones at least twice. I am always looking for new stuff by you. There are few authors I can say that about. Why haven't you written any original fiction that I could buy in the store...lol. Anyway, keep up the wonderful work! Look forward to future chapters and stories!

Duckie
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From ANON - SP777 on March 18, 2008
about # 4...

Oh...my...GAWD!!!! Hahahahaahahaaa!!!

That was TOO damn funny! Talk about making an entrance! :-D

I could just SEE the jaws hitting the floor. Oh man! :-)

I was eating cereal when I read that and TRIED not to laugh out
loud. *sigh* It's sad it has to be this way, but whatever it takes to
get a message through.

Me, personally, I would have done it at breakfast time...less people. :-)

...and what do you MEAN you wonder WHY Purity has a lot of
females fans??? You can't go describing a delicious piece of chocolate cake and
NOT expect people too drool! *rolls eyes* REALLY!

Puhleeze, tell me you were playin'!
*****
about # 5...

Me thinks this chapter should be called, ''The Games People Play'',
since it was masterminded so well....by Draco & the Author herself(?).

*applauds* Bravo!!! Brava!!!
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From ANON - Matt on March 18, 2008
This is a lovely story.

I think it's something very new in the large harry/draco section.
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From ANON - avihenda on March 18, 2008
great chapter. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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From alma on March 16, 2008
good chapter.
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