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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From tiapotter18 on March 09, 2008
    i really like the story so far, i just have a few questions. 'brian' says that he does not have to have sex with draco, but if he did it would be a bonus. has harry met other people like that, where him having sex with them was a possibility. would he have accepted/declined any sexual advances from his clients? cant wait for your update :)
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on March 09, 2008
    wow! that's a great 1st meeting. I can't wait 'til "Brian" meets Draco's parents. I could just imagine Lucius' anger. I think that Harry & Brian are just a little bit too much alike and it's just a matter of time until Draco starts getting suspicious and connects the dots.

    when I read the part when they met and the their banter, the way they lied and kept their emotions to themselves, it made me feel a bit inadequate. I can't even lie without my eyes shifting everywhere. shameful.

    anyways update soon.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 09, 2008
    Wow. I'm on the edge of my seat. This is a really good story. Very intriguing and very original. I like it a lot.
    update!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 09, 2008
    lol@ Draco's celebratory wank! I can't wait until they show out at the Manor...and to see how Harry really handles Lucius, Narcissa and even Draco. I like that Harry is already losing himself in Brian to the point where he's not being careful like he usually is. I can tell already, like your other story, this one is going to be as much about self discovery and identity development as connecting with someone else. I love the push and push back of these two, it's really exciting to read and you write them so well. I wonder if Harry knows that subconsciously that story he told Draco is truer than he thinks it is? lol.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 09, 2008
    Ch. 2- Oh what a tangled web we weave!!! Talk about lying and being knee deep in it...this is gonna get so messy if feelings get involved. I'm loving it! I'm surprised Harry crafted someone like Brian, sounds so close, too close to Harry..which is probably why Draco is so smitten with that one. lol@Purity....nice! would like to see a separate story on Draco with that guy at some point. The whole lying thing is also gonna be interesting in terms of how they build intimacy and trust if Harry ever reveals himself. How can you trust someone who lies that effortlessly? Now that I see what Draco meant by his mother needing to be pushed differently, I'm a bit worried....sounds like a lot of drama and heartbreak for her, all for vengeance on his father....that may wind up hurting him if this isn't done carefully. So excited about this...ok, off to read Ch. 3.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 09, 2008
    Sigh...OK, you got me...again! First chapter promises that this is gonna be devilishly fun and full of unexpected epiphanies...I wonder how many people do this in our own world, I'm sure more than we'll ever know. I like how you're dealing with homophobia and racism in regards to blood status. I love the idea of Harry's business and it's perfect for him. I'm curious about why Narcissa needs to be pushed in a different way, can't wait to hear what that's all about. I hope Draco can actually accomplish his plan, but something tells me he's gonna get distracted and a lot more than he bargained for....Looking forward to the laughter, especially after you scared the bejesus outta me with that Trespass story :p
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  • From ANON - Faery on March 08, 2008
    Lets just say that I LOVE this story, I cannot wait to say how Harry and Draco will play with the Malefoys! But I have a question: Harry's abilities to change is magic, or a potential like Tonks? Will we know how he discovered He could do that? Keep writing, I swear I will continue to read^^
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  • From LeeB on March 08, 2008
    I'm literally quivering ... this is going to be SO Good. I can see so many possibilities, and each is tastier than the last.
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  • From NightLo on March 08, 2008
    This is another interesting and great fiction, thanks for this...btw, why does Harry go into this special profession?
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  • From ANON - Sunny on March 07, 2008
    I absolutely adore your stories and I think it's high time I let you know. The long ones get me hooked with there intricate details and delicious plot and the short ones amuse me when I don't have the attention span to sit for that long. This one had me already throughly intrigued by the first chapter and this one only furthered that. It makes me smile whenever I see that you've updated. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Yume111 on March 07, 2008
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on March 07, 2008
    love it! please email me when you update ^_^
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  • From X5927alpha on March 07, 2008
    I like this story. I want to see what it will be like if Harry as this new guy and Draco make sexin's. And then I want to see what happens when Draco finds out it is Harry. Write more and post soon please!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 07, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 3!!! I'm surprised Draco wasn't reminded of someone.
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  • From CrookShanks on March 06, 2008
    WooHoo...nicely done. I'm officially hooked and can't wait for an update!! This is so great, I'm salivating over your story like Draco is over "Brian's" picture. *grins* This is such a great idea for a story! KLS
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