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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 26, 2008
    that was some crazy azz acting Harry was doing. He's such a badass in this fic. Although I knew he was able to do all of this, it's still really fascinating to see him do his thing. I loved how he worked Alice, and got her to see reason. She can do much better (not than Draco, poor thing, who can do better than him?) but than the deal she was about to get. The brief longing of Draco to succumb to Lucius's offer was very human and real. I know I would be tempted if i were in his position..but it really was a bad deal...I'm actually sort of glad that Lucius said Draco couldn't back peddle and had to keep Harry out of his bed once married, he probably sealed Draco's resolve with that. Now I wonder if Lucius will simply back off or will he be moved to support his son now that he knows what kind of power he's dealing with, real or not, the fact that Harry could make him believe it is real power. I want Harry to give Nusante a taste of some of that. LOL. And during that scene I almost expected Draco to jump up and defend Lucius or at least tell Harry to back off...but I why should he? Loved that Draco realizes that he loves all of Harry and the fact that you mixed pity in with his longing and pride really speaks to how layered his feelings are. Can't wait to see them duke it out about expectations for the future..and I hope it gets resolved quickly so they can get back to defending their right to love each openly. AWESOME update : ))))
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  • From MightyGryffindor on June 26, 2008
    I really like this story. I actually laughed hard at the vision of Lucious cowering and crying out as it seemed his body was disappearing before his very eyes swollowed by shadows! I would have gave anything though if you had added he had pissed himself before Draco and Harry with Draco giving a witty comment about it. That would have been the icing on the cake. Harry really couldn't ask Lucious to remove the spell as he had insinuated he already knew what it was. I guess a trip to a dark arts library will be in order :]

    MightyGryffindor
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  • From Yume111 on June 25, 2008
    #41

    I love the care, dedication and ingenuity Harry has apparently used to make his personas into real people.
    It
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  • From Yume111 on June 25, 2008
    #40
    I like how Harry is deliberately using the different sides of his personality he has made into personas now while staying himself.

    I like this Kingsley better than the Desire Kingsley. They are both irritating, but this one seems to be willing to listen to facts and face them. On the other hand I think it
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  • From Yume111 on June 25, 2008
    #39
    well, sorry again :o)

    I know I
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  • From ANON - Karen on June 25, 2008
    Thanks for writing a quick update again. I love reading your story and the fact that every time I return there's something new to read. Please keep writing
    thnx!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 25, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 42!!!
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on June 23, 2008
    ahh! what a mean way to end the chapter....grrrrr update soon!! ah!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 23, 2008
    Yes, if you had prematurely given us an ''no-nonsense'' Harry in the beginning
    I would have just simply seen it as an earlier introduction of his personas, like
    Brian.

    **************
    about #41...

    I said it once and I'll SAY it again, that tricky, sneaky snake! I had a feeling
    it was the type of spell that compelled someone to do something against their
    will. Quite clever if you ask me.

    Too bad Lucius isn't familiar with the muggle game, Battleship, because his is
    JUST about to sink. ;-)


    PS-I had reviewed on one of your oneshots that dealt with Draco, being an Auror &
    he wore glasses, while Harry was Hogwarts Quidditch coach [forgot the name]. BUT,
    I wanted to say you ought to let your humor come through more. While your
    Intellectual Series is good, I know you have a dry sense of humor, if I'm reading
    you right, i.e. the strange names you throw in your stories and that wonderful
    scene in said oneshot where Harry did the Polsky Loop??? Is that right?

    It WAS fun, as I had mentioned before.

    Anyway, keep that in mind.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2008
    sesome please keep updating these on such a regular basis it makes it more enjoyable t orad knowing you aren't going to leacve it hanging. I love the way you've writen this and the story please continue~
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  • From Mangacat on June 23, 2008
    Wahahahaa.. Lucius is in for an interesting duel I'd say.. I never had real difficulties in keeping your stories apart while they were running exept for this one with 'A more worldly man'... well, I'll manage, let's see how the father son confrontation works out!
    Cat
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 22, 2008
    Hmm..mmm. I like this Alice girl. Been liking her from the get go...can't wait to see how Harry convinces her and what kind of show they make of that! Lucius is about to go down. hahahaha. Can't wait! I like how well Draco can read his friends, especially Pansy. You'd think they'd been married before. I'm glad you're showing how Harry is thinking of their future, his pondering what changes he may have to make in his life and him wondering how Draco will fit in and what changes will be asked of him. He's WONDERING about the future, whereas Draco seems fixated of a predetermined future he's created in his head, which worries me terribly. I hope the fight they have isn't too bad...this is real love after all. And go Draco for putting that arsehole Nusante in his place!! I used to be a Nusante fan, but that was like a dozen or so chapters ago..lol. That dude has lost all his cool points and I hope the spell Draco put on him has him crashing down in guilt so hard that he's groveling at Harry's feet by the end of this fic. LOVE the letters in the middle of alley...hahahaha, take that you homophobes! I can't wait to see the fall out of all of these things. You're doing such a marvelous job of holding suspense and using drama strategically, not over done or underdone, but just enough to make it compelling and keep this long story going. I'm still in love with this story, and look forward to Lucius's arrival :) GREAT update!
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  • From Lunatichero on June 22, 2008
    I like Alice Moonstone. She is one of the few people in the pureblood society that we have seen that is not
    naive and easily overtaken, and yet she still has a good sense of dry humour. You just don't see enough of
    that in society. Naughty Lucius, bringing along his sons 'future bride.' If you ask me, someone is definitely
    counting their chickens...
    Just saying...
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 22, 2008
    about #40...

    *shakes finger at Lomonaaeren* Now, THIS is the Harry Potter I've been waiting
    to see again. Defiant, poised, and willing to bitch-slap if necessary.

    I'm glad to see you acknowledge the ''threat'' Draco may be under from Lucius with
    the spell that may or may not be there. Could Harry sense it if he tried?
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  • From Lunatichero on June 20, 2008
    I know that this sounds a little crude, but Harry got love, and a little heartfelt nookie, and he's got a
    much surer stride now. Its like all of the time he spent just working at Metamorphosis and letting
    Meek!Harry dominate his private life was a kind of adolescense, where his skills were too big for
    his 'real' personality, and now he's reached a fully adult state where every other person he is has
    reconciled with the man that created them all, and he's able to utilize them in a constantly moving stream
    of character traits and physical aspects.
    Frankly, I feel a little proud of our dear Harold...
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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