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Reviews for Changing of the Guard

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Thalia on June 20, 2008
    You are an amazing and gifted writer. This story is worthy of being put into physical book form. I look forward to the next 10 chapters and will be sad when it is over. Currently I get a smile on my face when I see the next chapter is ready. Thank you for sharing your talents with the rest of us. --Thalia
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2008
    PLease continue writing this is a lovely story I love reading it!~
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  • From Mangacat on June 20, 2008
    MWahahahaa... well.. Harry has quite the hold over Kingsley, that scene was awesome.. let's hope it really stays that way!! And Draco's tangle with his father, well, that IS certainly going to be interesting!! I wonder what Lucius has planned..
    Cat
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 19, 2008
    Whoa! Wait a minute...what kind of dark magic could Lucius use to merely compel Draco to take a wife? I'm intrigued. I hope it doesn't mess with his relationship with Harry. Speaking of Harry...mmm hmm. LOVE it when he shows off his stuff, and his show with Kingsley had me believing he could do everything he said he could do. I'm glad that he didn't refer to other voices too much during that encounter. He seemed pretty grounded in being himself, which a great sign. Although, he was acting wasn't he, so I wonder if that still counts...I'm glad to hear that Kingsley really isn't a part of all the trickery and plotting going on, but I do wonder now if it's really Lucius or someone else, and who the traitor may be. So you say Ron and Hermione may surprise me eh? I hope so, please prove me wrong and turn their friendship with Harry back around. He needs friends AND Draco : ) Speaking of which, I can't wait to see what comes of this meeting with Lucius at Pansy's house. Drama! Not liking Lucius's calmness and offer for Draco to be out and open with Harry for a year, besides the spell, I hope he doesn't have more sinister plans for offing Harry. I love how Draco handled his dad this time, some of the subtle cuts were the most biting and Lucius looks like he's not holding up as well as before. Hopefully he's almost at the end of his rope and will back off. I am little concerned about how "bright" Draco is viewing his future with Harry. It's almost as if he has rose colored glasses on..but then again, sometimes wearing those is the only way to get through a crisis and tough times. I just hope he doesn't put too much pressure on Harry to be more than he is, the way everyone else has....there's the potential for that in all of his "dreams" of Harry. GREAT update, loved the press conference, bring on the Drama at Pansy's house!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 18, 2008
    about #38 & 39...

    Damn! I'm gone for a little bit and you turn Harry Potter into freakin'
    Sybil! *tsk* Just don't have him speaking in different voices, then I'll
    have to personally call for an exorcist. :-)

    ..oh wait, he HAS spoken in different voices!!! :-o

    But, I'm glad you had Draco come through for him.

    I would have gotten a tad nervous to see him slip into a place he couldn't
    escape from. Plus, I'm glad to see him get one over on Hermione.

    That's all. *walks off humming Ghetto Boys song, ''Minds Playing Tricks on Me''*
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  • From lawrencecasher on June 18, 2008
    the Estival sounds alot like samba...
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  • From lawrencecasher on June 18, 2008
    this story is funny when it needs to be touche!
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  • From TempestLore on June 17, 2008
    Nice story! Like how you combined multiple personality disorder with the gay rights agenda. I do sometimes wonder why Draco loves Harry so unconditionally though. I know you've said that he sees them as a perfect match but,why? Harry is really screwed up and I like how you let it play out, with some resolution in this last chapter. His business idea is brilliant and plausible. I find myself getting a little lost between dialogue and thought and you are head hopping quite a bit which is a big no,no, but all in all you write beautifully. Maybe do double spacing on your Word doc,make it easier to read? Now I'm just being a nag! Great story! Keep it up! Interested to see what Lucius is going to do. One question..Did Lucius have these extra marital affairs,keeping a male lover in the closet, like he expects Draco to do? Lastly, I'm glad you made this about love because I do have gay male friends who do have a lot of risky sex with multiple partners and do not take precautions(I'm in the travel business so all of my friends just about are gay males) one of which died of Aids (WAS MY BOSS) and frankly, while I'm not one of those women that is homophobic, I am one of those "just not in my face," people self-admittedly. Your story has made me reexamine that attitude, and for that reason this story is really an uplifting tale for gay and nongay. Be proud of yourself! I write Dramione but this is the first slash story I've read that actually piqued my interest. Awesome work!!
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  • From avihenda on June 16, 2008
    it's allways fun to read your chapters :-) Great twist!
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  • From Mangacat on June 16, 2008
    Ok.. so now with Draco there we're over this little bout of madness and wanting to annihilate ourselves to be able to face the music. I wonder if he will continue Metamorphosis in England, but I think so.. there's just the feeling that this isn't the last obstacle on the way.. well, we've GOT over ten more chapters to go, eh? I can't wait!!
    Cat
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on June 16, 2008
    very good chapter, so hopefully now everything with harry and his "friends" is worked out and we can move on to finding out whats gonna happen with the rebelion
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  • From ANON - gentlenightrain on June 16, 2008
    Simply heartwarming. *heart*
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  • From ANON - Alix on June 15, 2008
    Yay! Harry made a big leap in feeling whole :)
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  • From Trinity18 on June 15, 2008
    Before I say anything else, I just want you to know that I have loved every story that you have written and don't ever plan to miss out on any future writings you may endevour to complete. I have been keeping up with everything but haven't reviewed because I felt that everyone else has broached any questions I might have had and you have answered them. Personally, I feel that Harry has gotten the short end of the stick since his parents were killed and it just didn't get any better. He is human but no one wants to allow him to be so. Powers mean nothing if he doesn't have a health outlook on himself or his position in life. All of the reasons he feels he is a failure are just normal everyday human faults. If I was to scrutinize every time I let someone down by just forgetting or not completing something because I didn't want to, MAN, in his state of mind I would have killed myself by now. I'm glad that you have written the story in this approach with Draco as a balancing factor because it always seemed to me that Rowlings Harry Potter could have used something to temper his feelings of guilt. A little Slytherin goes a long way, you know. Thank you again for the masterful writing and I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story will unfold from here.
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  • From Lunatichero on June 15, 2008
    It feels like, in a deranged, not really, kind of way, I'm watching a story about The Hulk. Maybe I'm influenced by the release of the movie,
    but I have some qualifiers. Harry's ability is something that he can't change, though his isn't as dangerous, and he doesn't actually want
    to get rid of it, it scares the people around him, and the ones he tells about it, save perhaps Draco, want to make it stop. He has a huge
    confrontation with most of the important people in his life and then, when the sun comes up on the next day, he's still using it, but now,
    he's using it as a tool for Harry, instead of a cover for Harry. He's learned to control the portrayal of his abilities. I know I didn't say ]
    alot today, but the story is at a happy place (kinda) right now, and we all know that happiness needs much less comment than despair.

    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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