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Reviews for Masters of Manipulation

By : Nerys
  • From ANON - Lissy on March 14, 2008
    This is a brilliant story... very well written. You should capitalize the title, and maybe fool around with the summary to try to draw in more readers...

    I love the plot, and I'm especially loving this new development... namely Riddle seems to be focused on Hermione in a way that isn't directly related to books. What I like best about this relationship is that she's not all that reciprocal. I do love the thrill of the hunt.

    I'm also really hoping she'll start thinking more deeply about things. Up until this point, Riddle has ALWAYS had the upper hand, and seems to be the Master of Manipulation in every way. He played Hermione like a fiddle, and even when she was aware she was helpless to stop it. I want to see Hermione kicking ass now, and that little wish is being granted nicely.

    I've always liked the idea of Lord Voldemort having a soft spot for someone, and while I wouldn't call this spot soft, at least there is an area in his empty heart where she's payed attention to. I really wish Riddle had gotten possessive when she danced with the Hufflepuff. I like the idea of him fighting over her, whether she
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on March 14, 2008
    ok so now im just pissed...WE had tom first so she can back off. lmao *Hears evil laugh as she is writing review* 'Oh hello Tom, what is the insane laughter for?', *Tom laughs yet again* 'I've never had 3 ladys fighting over me before!'....See he gets off on it. thats why i have to use my many many talents to control him, although lately he has been disappearing for long periods of time? can you shed any light on that? oh well must dash....Lucius is calling and that naughty scamp Barty is testing my patience...

    excellent chapter Nerys x
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on March 13, 2008
    Ok miss...i am willing to share Tom...I'll have the older snake man coz i happen to know that he can do WICKED things with that tongue..maybe we can swap every now and again....lmao.....my list is mounting now, whats a girl to do? i just seen to have a gaggle of delicious men at my feet...each one wanting thier wicked way with me....oh to love slytherins! great update doll x x
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  • From evildolly on March 13, 2008
    Well I could lend you Tom for a bit...epecially for Bittersweet *grin* But he has to be home by 6! Make sure he gets fed and all...*sigh* It's such a pain in the ass caring for a Dark Lord...but hey as long as the sex is mind-blowing MUAHAHAHAHHAAAA!!! *looks pointedly at Riddle* yeah you heard me!!!
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  • From AnnaValerious on March 13, 2008
    Oooh! Yet another good chappy! yay! Can't wait for the next one!! :)
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on March 12, 2008
    hahaha i still adore this story and the added hotness of my Tom makes the story even more fabulous, i love the relationship between the pair! update soon doll! x
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  • From evildolly on March 12, 2008
    Muahaha anything he wants indeed....sexy sneaky Tom!! "Hermione wants to meet the floor as soon as possible! Any floor, as long as you're supervising!" LMAO!! I really love reading serpensotias reviews almost as much as the story ROTFLMAO!! Oh I haven't made you a nice cappy in awhile...here yah go!!! And some cookies too =) Now I shall go dream about a certain Slytherin Heir lalalalala *walks away with a Luna look on face*

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  • From AnnaValerious on March 12, 2008
    Ohhhh!!! Mwhaha Tom is so evil! I can't wait for the ball to happen! I'm sure Tom is going to make Mione wear a sexy dress hmmm? Can't wait for more!!!! :)
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  • From Darkwolf01 on March 12, 2008
    God damn! This is good! Please update quickly! Quickly! They passed out, what's in the books, what's going on?!
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  • From Ssserpensssotia on March 11, 2008
    Chappy 4.

    "So after Minerva promised Hermione to keep her secret, Hermione told her everything"..WHAT? Are you a complete fool, Hermione? You cannot trust anybody! Gosh...I'll kill her!

    "And Minerva, as it turned out, was a good listener. " Oh really, I wonder why?! Gees,Hermione, you're telling a girl about her FUTURE! Of course she'll listen to your story with all her ears. Gryffindor is for life!

    "
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  • From Ssserpensssotia on March 11, 2008
    Serpie's back...chappy 3! Serpie is angry with the internet connections...i'll bite them.


    "Like neither of them had ever seen or heard of the concept of a book before. ". Ye, Crabbe and Goyle in the making...
    'What's that, Her-mi-one?'
    'Looks like paper, Tom'
    'Duh? Paper? Toilet paper?'
    'Yo, I'm cool with it.Let's use it'
    'Yeah'

    Duh, Slughorn. Hate the man. At least Dumbles is smart and not an asslikcker. I wonder if he was an "asslicker" rolemodel for To-...No, no, no...I meant that WHAT A BAD SLUGHORN..yeh...looks around franticly...

    "Neither of them dared to move, afraid to draw attention to the jail-sending-volumes on the ground."...Going to jail for possessing a book..kinda ironic for Tom, if you think about it. He likes "possessing" things.LOL

    "He was walking behind a hovering tower of cauldrons, books, candy bags, mortars, bottles and various indefinable objects,"....vibrators, nipple rings, clitor stimulator, BDSM stuff...Nice fellow.

    "When he reached Hermione, he pressed his big belly forward, stopping the gigantic mass from its pursuit of the corridor."...eeeuuuu....Gross..I'm kinda glad it was his belly and not his "needle" LOL

    "Thinking he gained control of the tower, he eyed Tom and Hermione with a look of triumph upon his reddened face." Yeah, no one says I have no control over my anal-balls and vibrators! Take that!

    "Hermione immediately dove into the pile as well, tossing aside cauldrons, sacks of candy, mortars
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  • From Ssserpensssotia on March 11, 2008
    Chappy 2.

    Serpie is here...lol

    "Her talk with Dumbledore had taken quite some time, even though he did not want to hear details of the future, at least not at first"..ye, that's it! At least not at first. Trust the old coot..

    "It was inconvenient to put it mildly that she had to stumble right into the arms of Lord Voldemort upon arriving here"...No, no, no, Hermione. It was the perfect moment! Where else would you end up than in his arms? Stupid woman, doesn't recognize the happiness when one shows up..

    " Of all the people in this school I have to run into him. Why
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  • From Ssserpensssotia on March 11, 2008
    Guess who's here!!! LOL

    Chapter 1.

    Serpie liky, liky this!!!

    "trying to get away from the source of the destruction, hoping not to accidentally cross the path of any of the spells that came from the 13
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  • From AnnaValerious on March 09, 2008
    This story is getting so good!! I really do love it! I wonder whats in the jar! And why older Voldie didn't hurt Mione!! Can't wait for more! :)
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  • From evildolly on March 09, 2008
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