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From yeagerbomb on September 10, 2008
i made an actually, literal, physical sound of joy when i realized another chapter had been posted, even though i haven't finished what's up so far.

chapter twenty-two:
iiieeee!! rem gets to go to hogwarts for the school year!! but now... now siri's parents might send him somewhere else... NOOOOOOESSSS!!!! that's so not fair.
chapter twenty-three:
yay for sorta-bonding with siri and reg. they need that sometimes. heehee. reg messed the cake. that was amuzing. i really hope siri gets to go back to hogwarts, he just got too! and james. james, james, james... he's so lovesick. it's annoyingly cute. gag. awwws!! siri misses rem as much as james misses lilly. they so cute. yay for siri having a talk about *gasp* feelings with his uncle!! awwws... sirius is so screwed. for lifes. really. this sucks. /I/ don't hope he starts liking girls suddenly. that would suck.
chapter twenty-four:
yay for the perfect prank!! that's so awesome.
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From yeagerbomb on September 10, 2008
chapter nineteen:
silly boy. of COURSE dumbledore knows you're there. he knows everything about everyone. *sigh* but yes, at least he does have the sense not to go to dada.
chapter twenty:
i've gotten so engrossed, i can't really find myself with things to comment on. i just want to keep reading.
chapter twenty-one:
DAMBITALL!!!! they were so close, SO! CLOSE!! they were less than an inch away from kissing, and then that A-HOLE spion had to RUIN it!!! GRRRRRRR!!!!!! ...'shit!' that was perfect. yay james. good GRIEF, this is so depressing. i hate this. i mean, i love the story, i just hate what's happening to remus. he's so sweet, and i just LOVE him to pieces. i hope he and siri get a chance soon to talk about what almost happened. *squishynesses* yays.

i should go to bed... but last night i was definately plagued by this story. -_- of course, catching up won't help me any, just leave me with nothing to read. so... i'll leave it at this for now and finish tommorrow.~
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From yeagerbomb on September 09, 2008
chapter ten:
they are so cute!!! i love them so much. siri's gonna take healing lessons, and they're just so adorable together!! gawd. i really love this fic. the plot is so good and it's just wonderful.
chapter eleven:
yays!! he's making friends with james and peter. *glare* i hate peter. anyway, i'm really happy they're being friends now, it's good for them! and yay for rom not going anywhere!
chapter twelve:
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! wtf??? i so pissed now. i can't believe they would DO that! why the hell would ebony betray them? grrrrr... i'm so mad! and james is friends with sirius now! or is he just trying to get them in trouble? i hope not... i really want them to be friends!
chapter thirteen:
eerrrr. i hate sirius's dad. he's mean. poor rom, six years in azkaban. poor rem, all alone but for firenze and siri, who's not even there. this is really upsetting. i hate the angst!! yet, i live on it.
chapter fourteen:
dumblydore!! he's such a good friend to these poor kids. i hate rita, too. she's such a bitch, without even really meaning to! i really like dumbledore's cryptic way of giving siri info. it's awesome.
chapter fifteen:
poor remmy!! he's so upset, and so am i! i just sent my sister the link to this story, and she's about to start reading it. augh! i can't believe he didn't think the cloak smelled like sirius. i really thought that was what it would say, but noooooo~ooooooo. it smells like... like... CLEAN!! i've never been so offended by clean. zomg!!! they are soooooo cute!! i love remmy using siri as a pillow!! must love cute fluffy squish!!
chapter sixteen:
aaaahhh!! i hate james right now! i mean, i know it's a werewolf we're talking about, but, dammitall, does he have to be such a BITCH about it??? oh my gosh!! siri and rem are just TOO cute! i know rem's living in the forest practically all alone, but he's still adorable. i can't wait for them to hook up. i really wanna hug them and squeeze them and whatnot. because they're so. darned. cute. siri just said rem has a cute smile!! a CUTE SMILE!!!! yeeeeeessssssssssssssssss!!!!! siri's developing a crush and realizing it!! WHOOHOOO!!! i love it when love starts out slow and timid. it always works out better that way. *sigh* and then siri took him inside (which i so saw coming eventually) and then rom... rom... rom's a ghost? realsies??
chapter seventeen:
...so much just freakin happened i can't remember it all. umm...yay for james being their friend? i hope he's being sincere. i don't want to have to NOT like him again. i keep going back and forth and it's really tiring.
chapter eighteen:
eeeek!! james is sharing the invisibility cloak?!?!? zomg!! and now... *squeals* now siri is thinking about maybe he's gay!! yays!! aww. and siri pledged to find the cure for being a werewolf for him. they's so cuuuuuuuuuuute!!!

this story is fantastic! i really love reading it and i can't wait to go on. however, i have homework and sleeping to do, so i think i have to stop for tonight. great story, 5/5 +'s and this is like my fourth review. yays.~
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From yeagerbomb on September 09, 2008
chapter five:
aaahhh!! rem scared rom by almost getting caught and tooked away! that sucks!! poor rem and siri though, they can't see each other no mores. *emo-tears**sigh* they'll figure something out eventually.
chapter six:
awws. rem can't talk to siri and he's sad. i love that james's mum told him to be nice to siri!! i hope they can at least kinda get along. i love regulus too. and yay to sirius for putting up the banner in his bedroom!! his mum's gonna flip. and imma laugh.
chapter seven:
james and sirius are making friends. kinda. they be friends soon? it be cute. well, yeah sirius. that's why they're called permenant. and poor remmy!! he's so abused by the wolf inside him. awwws... i feel bad.
chapter eight:
...i'm tempted to start banging my head into my desk at sirius's stupid actions, but it's not his fault. it's adorable that he wants to protect remmy from the danger, but... the irony! i know what's going on, and siri doesn't. siri thinks he's saving rem, but he's endangering himself. idiot!! oh goodness. sirius is so scared. it's kinda funny, but it's devastating. i really hope that he still loves rem afterward (of course he will) and that rem won't hurt him (of course he won't).
chapter nine:
this is so depressing. remmy ran off practically ready to cry, and then rom's all like, 'i protect my brother', and i'm all like, 'that is sooooo adorably hot!!'. yeah. i have a sibling complex. sue me. and sirius is so scared! he's shaking, and he doesn't know why!!! this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *can't add enough 'o's* cute!! it's heart-wrenching, but i love it!!~
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From yeagerbomb on September 09, 2008
chapter two:
yay friends!!! i really liked the letter-format, and i can't wait to read more! so i'll go read more!
chapter three:
they is so cute! i know there's not 'luff' yet, but they're still cute, even as friends. yays!! i think i have time for one more chapter before i need to go to class. so i guess i'll read it!!
chapter four:
dude, rem, siri's gonna get lost in the woods. that's how he found you, remember? by getting lost! how is he ever gonna find his way back alone?

great story, i really love this so much!! i'm so excited by the possibilities! your writing is terrific and the plot is so juicey. i can't wait to read more, but it's time to get ready for class.~
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From yeagerbomb on September 09, 2008
prologue:
omg. that was so sad. i love remmy having a brother rom. it's so...cliche, but awesome. i hate their parents!! but i think i'm supposed too, soo... i don't care too much. it also accured to me, as i went to go on, that they are moving into the shrieking shack, pre-shrieking. right?
chapter one:
the first thought in my mind when sirius's mum yelled at him was, 'god, what a bitch'. poor sirius. he's so screwed. no dada books, an owl that bites, slytherin robes, and no friends (yet). that sucks.~
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From rowen on September 06, 2008
Thank you so much for updating so surprisingly quickly! This story is so sweet and so utterly desirable! I have been following it for months, and I continuously can't wait for more. This is one of the greatest retellings I could have imagined. Frankly, this is the only slash pairing in HP that ever made sense (ignoring the Dumbledore/Grindelwald thing) and you have handled it better than any other story I've read. Others have been clever or sexy or cute, but only yours has been handled with a delicate sweetness that is endearing and appropriate and unbelievably wonderful. I love this story, and I love happy endings and retellings of badly handled canon characters, and I'll say it again, I can't wait for more!
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From serenagold on September 06, 2008
Sirius's Uncle Alphard is great. Aside from being the only "cool" uncle to the boys that they have, he is at least really trying to be supportive of his nephew.

I don't know when I missed the last update, but I'm so excited that everything worked out well for Remus. I was really worried for a while there. I hope Greyback won't try to actually take responsiblity for Remus, but it does seem almost fitting that he is able to save his life after being the direct cause of his misery.

Keep up the great work!
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From Leentjef on September 02, 2008
very very good keep going and
post soon
bye bye
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From ANON - Marr on August 28, 2008
So I finally just got through the last of the chapters. It took me HOURS to finish but here I am, all the information and wonderful writing locked in my head as I sit here impatiently awaiting more. -sigh- Anyway, I'm surprised that more people haven't read your story, and even more surprised they haven't reviewed it. I myself was a bit apprehensive but I gave it a go and I enjoyed it thoroughly. :D You're quite talented. But aside from that I'm glad you've kept up with this and I hope you don't drop dead any time soon, that would be really quite tragic. Not only because you would be dead but this story would remain unfinished. Hmm... But I suppose it would be worse that you'd be dead than the story not be finished... Uhm... Yeah... So, uh... Heheh? That sounded kind of lame...
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From Leentjef on August 24, 2008
very very good chapter keep foing adn post soon
bye bye
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From serenagold on August 23, 2008
((o_o))

I..

Holy crap! I can't believe you just wrote that. I mean I knew eventually something would happen but I didn't think it would happen so suddenly or hit me so hard. :(
Keep the great work, but do it quickly. I really want to know what will happen to Remus. And poor Sirius. I loved their first kiss. But oh my god. Gah. I need the next update!
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From Leentjef on August 13, 2008
wow this was awsome
i really like this storry please keep going and post
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
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From Nalana on August 09, 2008
OKie. You've managed two feats with this story. Fist is the fact that it is a rare occasion when I start to read something that's over three chapters long already, heck most of the time I try to stick with one shots or completed stories. You've also made me register with this website- something I have been putting off for a couple years-- just so I could review.

This story is fresh, compelling, and quite well written. Your style is anything but boring, and I felt myself not being able to press "next chapter" quickly enough. ((It even kept me from going to bed at three am as I had planned, instead I was up until five.)) I love your take on Rom. I adore it. And I like the exclusion of Sirri by Peter and James at first. It just really fit well.

Bonus points other things. Such as developing the centaurs into a full fledged society that would even consider being friends with Remmie and Rom. Also, including the Blacks, Rita, the Potters, and other background-yet-essential characters in full form. You've certainly done a wonderful job with keeping your characters distinct.

Much love for this story and author. I can't wait for more.

-NW

P.S.- I apologize for any typos that may be here. A glitch has left me unable to see portions of the comment box.
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From serenagold on August 07, 2008
Wow. Remus is the reason for the making of the map! Thats freaking brilliant!!

Keep up the awesome work. ^^
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