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Reviews for The Producers

By : fbowden
  • From dreaminGemini on November 02, 2009
    Finally I got through it. Wow, that was one of the most compeling fics I have ever read about those two. The back and forth between Snape and Harry's relationship was very good and something I would imagine to be true if they did try to be together. there were some moments that i just had to giggle at and other where I closed my eyes before I continued because I knew what would happen. great job!
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  • From sweething10 on September 05, 2008
    I really enjoyed this story. Their reactions to reading about themselves in the fanfic was so funny! Especially Snape and the sneering. Loved it! The complicated relationship they formed was interesting to follow.
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  • From sweetciel on June 08, 2008
    One of the absolute best! I was hooked from the first sentence. Sooooooo good!!!! Despite the ups and mostly downs, the fact that they made it...it's just so sweet! I dearly hope that there is a sequel
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  • From servantofall36 on April 18, 2008
    This story is so great. I just love the concept of Harry and Snape reading fan fiction about themselves! Ha! Snape can be a cruel bastard, can't he? But you present his inner torment so well. It is so easy to see why he is the way he is. He is so compelled to put Harry through one loyalty test after another. I think Harry had better settle it in his mind that he must be rock steady through every trial. I do not envy him the task.

    Snape's epiphany scene when he realises that he can get past Lucius' abominable treatment of him is very good. I think it could have been a bit more detailed, though. I think his explanations to Harry were perfectly 'Snape-ish'. I am sure you know what I mean. I am glad that Snape decides to give Harry the chance he needs. And I am also happy to see that he does not walk away from Harry when challenges present themselves. He has thrown his lot in with Harry and he stays in it for the long haul. That is how I think it really would be for them, once Snape let down his walls. Very good.
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  • From Diane on April 17, 2008
    That was so wonderfully excellent. Yay more angst than I expected when the story started out with Harry reading fanfics and it was not at all what I expected. I thought it was going to be something a little cracked about them playing out a couple of the fics. Instead I got an actual story! That was so well written too, but that's not a surprise. I have never wanted to pop Draco in the mouth so much before. Though I would have given good money to see a drunk Draco dancing. Ah the blackmail potential of that. Delicious. I'm with Harry, I hated to see the cute little dragon pushed into the drink. I wasn't so sure about Harry crying so much. Now, a couple of the times of course, like when Sev said he loved Harry. Yeah, that's more than big enough to warrant him crying, especially if it's never been said to him before. Snape also got a bit sappy at the end as well. I do love this story though. It kept me entertained for so long. I'm sad to see it end.
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  • From Neinka on March 22, 2008
    Hi!
    Oh!Excellent story! (10/10:)) I love HP/SS pairing and your story is very very nice! I enjoy it from beginning to the end! I hope you wrote sequel some time...I will be watching you :o)
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  • From Pookah on March 14, 2008
    Well, I'm a bit disappointed I didn't get to see them dancing around singing "I Wanna Be a Producer!" I wanted to say that it would be a bit clearer it you put the excerpts Harry was reading in italics or bold face. This is an inriguing idea, that they are real people.
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  • From Jilliane on March 13, 2008
    Dear Flic-

    It was an absolute pleasure to read and a pleasure to review. I wanted to say that I didn't mean that I thought Harry cried unnecessarily, or that I saw him as gullible, and I certainly didn't see him as OOC. I meant quite the contrary and in definite contrast to a lot of fics I've read that have him whinging at the drop of a snark from Severus. No, I meant that I thought that even though he did cry kind of a lot, that it was appropriate to the situation and his feelings. I think your reasoning for it sound, and I agree %100! I just really loved the story, and am a bit sad it's over. I really loved what you did with Draco! Again, an absolute pleasure to read, and I'm excited to see the other stories you're working on! Thanks for a great read. :)

    Jilliane

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  • From fbowden on March 13, 2008
    Thank you to everyone for your wonderfully kind comments on The Producers, I can't tell you how chuffed I am that you all enjoyed reading it :D And Jilliane, thanks for commenting on each chapter, it really makes a girl's day to know how much you had fun with it! The sequel is in production, but it's slow going as there are other fics I'm working on too but they'll be posted here eventually. On the note of Harry's waterworks - I was quite aware that he might be seen as OOC for that, but I also thought that a boy/man who, lets face it, has gone through life with very little love at all, and certainly none in the romantic sense, would be pretty grizzly about a relationship he so badly wants going sour. That was my reasoning :) He won't be quite as gullible in the next one!
    xxxFlicxxx
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  • From Jilliane on March 12, 2008

    Wow!!!!! 5 chapters at once!! The only bad thing about that is that it's the end of the story!! Waaah!

    I have to say, if Draco must be in the story, it couldn't have been done any better than you did it. I was absolutely howling with laughter at some of the lines, particularly "I think you'd lie down like the good little Slytherin you are and beg me to fuck you." That was a good one, as was the scene where Severus took the drunken and gassy Draco back to Malfoy Manor. I was rolling helplessly on the floor with that one! It was awesome!! This is what I adore about this story and "Fire Call", the humourous bits are excellent. You really have a talent for writing funny stuff. I also liked the description of the "Spitting Serpent" drink, it was very imaginative. I'm not really crazy about fics that turn Harry into a snivelling twit, turning the waterworks on at every opportunity, but you didn't do that, even though Harry did cry quite a bit. You made him sensitive and caring, not a whinging sissy; he cried at the thought of losing that which meant the most, which is what makes all the difference. And, of course, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Awwww! This story was wonderful. It had a little bit of everything; it was sweet, screamingly funny in places, there was a little mystery and intrigue, some sad moments, love, hate, jealousy, and the happy ending I love to see. Well done, Flic! I loved it all and in my humble opinion, YES PLEASE to a sequel!! Yay, Flic!

    *off to read the update to Fire Call*
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  • From nsal on March 12, 2008
    Amazing story. I am speechless. I dont know why I hadn't read it before, but this story is just beyond words. The last thing Severus says made me cry. That's so touching! I hope you come out with the sequel really soon. I love it! Thanks!
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  • From yaoified on March 12, 2008
    awwwwwww!!!!!!! it was so cute! loved it!!! *cries*
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  • From yaoified on March 12, 2008
    awwwwwww!!!!!!! it was so cute! loved it!!! *cries*
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  • From katecooley on March 12, 2008
    oooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooh! I love this! Great ending. They really are adorable.
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  • From fbowden on March 12, 2008
    Hey Jilliane! First off, let me just say I'm not a big fan of Draco either, so don't worry too much, and secondly I am posting part five of Fire Call right now xx
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