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By : fbowden
  • From Jilliane on March 12, 2008
    GRRRR! I had written you a nice review for this chapter (9), and then AFF went to it's daily down time and it didn't post!

    Okay, so....I can't really say I was happy to see Draco put in an appearance as I'm not fond of him, but that's just a personal observation, not a flame or criticism, so please don't take it that way! I am, however, a fan of Lucius and his Malfoy nastiness, and I'm deeply intrigued by this latest development with Severus getting sick and the memories he's had of him. Makes me wonder if it's a deep psychological issue, perhaps Lucius used Severus' love to torture him, or maybe he's simply cursed him in some way......the plot thickens even more! Can't wait to see how this develops, and if Severus will ever get past what it is that makes him think he's unworthy of Harry and/or love.

    Thanks so much for updating so fantastically fast and keeping my voracious appetite for this story fed! Yay Flic!!

    (btw....any chance you'll be updating "Fire Call" soon?)
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  • From Jilliane on March 11, 2008

    *gets grip on self*


    Wow! This chapter was beautiful....all the way until the end! I thought Severus was finally admitting to himself all he felt for Harry. He was so sweet and caring while they were in bed, moving slowly, aware it was Harry's first time....and then...OH!! Poor Harry, wounded again. Poor Severus, so clueless!

    That said, I'm a total sucker for angst, and the ending of this was wrenching. I love it and can't bear it at the same time!!

    Please, PLEASE hurry with an update!
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  • From Jilliane on March 11, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You're killing me!!!!!!!! You can't leave it there!! Oh hurry, HURRY please and update!!
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  • From katecooley on March 11, 2008
    Oh, these two chuckleheads...

    I love this. Even when they finally get to the sex, there's nothing but trouble.
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  • From Jilliane on March 11, 2008
    Oh poor Severus!! Harry was cruel, but I'm glad to see they made it up. I can't wait to see what Severus will answer to Harry's "Yes. Is that okay?" Kind of a cliffie!! Dying for the next update! Well done!
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  • From Jilliane on March 10, 2008
    Oooh, and the plot thickens! Great stuff, and I can't wait to see what Harry has in mind for Severus. You're doing a really good job at building the intensity and anticipation between these two, and this has great humour to it. I love Severus' reaction to the fanfiction about himself, especially how he takes his small pleasure in being referred to as handsome and sexy. Thanks for another great chapter, and for how fantasically fast you've been updating, which of course only whets my appetite for MORE!
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  • From fbowden on March 10, 2008
    Oh I'm really glad you're enjoying them! And thank you for reviewing often too, it really does make my day, I love to hear people's opinions on the stories :)
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  • From Jilliane on March 10, 2008
    Oh, I'm SO glad this wasn't the end of the story! I'm really enjoying this one, just as much as I am your other one, "Fire Call", which is absolutely brilliant. I'm so happy there's lots more of this one. The song in this one has always been a favourite of mine, and reminded me of another Phil Collins favourite, "One More Night", which I just had to go listen to. That would have been good for this too. This is such a great story. Your writing is just fantastic and I just can't wait for more. Thanks for letting us know there's lots more to look forward to.
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  • From fbowden on March 09, 2008
    Hi there! Glad you're enjoying the story; no this most certainly isn't the end; there are sixteen chapters in total and I'm uploading them as often as I have the time :) Should be about a chapter a day :)
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  • From Jilliane on March 09, 2008
    Wow, that was a fast update!

    And..oh!....(Chapter 5) the end brought a tear to my eye...that song....*sniff* Well done!


    But...please, PLEASE say this wasn't the end of the story?!?!?! MORE please!!!
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  • From Ravenheart on March 09, 2008
    I love this dance between them
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  • From Jilliane on March 09, 2008
    Oh, I am LOVING this story!!


    Now that they've got each other jealous as hell, can't wait to see what else they do about it.

    Great chapter! MORE please, and soon, please!
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  • From katecooley on March 09, 2008
    Oh these two! LOL! They're going to explode if they don't take care of this! Good stuff!
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  • From Jilliane on March 08, 2008
    Oh...a bit of a cliffhanger there, sort of. Will Harry be able to talk Severus around? Will he enjoy it if he does? Can't wait to find out! More please!!
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  • From Jilliane on March 08, 2008
    Oh! I'm SO enjoying your other story, "Fire Call" that I was thrilled to see you've put up another one! I'm liking this one very much as well, with all the cat and mousing Severus is doing with Harry. Please update soon! Can't wait to read more!
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