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Reviews for The Malfoy Chronicles: A Witch in Time

By : Kooldragon400
  • From dawnangel on April 18, 2008
    Not complaining at all. It was nicely done. Where did you get that curse. "Voldamont's Nipple No", that was hilarious. Poor Severus, and poor Tobias having to go with Snape to the dark lord. Draca is certainly very bold. Sirius is going to get himself into trouble. i am enjoying this story. Can't wait for more. I wonder how Tobias will react to seeing his dad, and the dark lord. Tobias knows he is a spy, and it was an evil time, but he probably never seen it with his own eyes. it will be an interesting reaction, especially if it was a revel or something.

    Dawnangel
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  • From dawnangel on April 13, 2008
    That was definitely interesting. I can't say I saw a full blown duel going down. Hehe, Lime green. Sirius plays mean, no fair. I do love your stories, they are very good. I like your other story, You Raise Me up, i saw the little girl coming though, it was funny, lucius' reaction. please keep writing. i like Tobias, he is a very round character. I can't wait for more.
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  • From dawnangel on April 06, 2008
    Nice prank, Hot pink? good choice. Interesting reaction the the prank from Sirius though, you'd think he would have been more manly about the such wonderful color. Are we going to see a great prank war start. Will Sirius enact revenge? I like finally seeing some character development in Tobias. Very interesting character. I lot like is father. Nice job, I am looking forward to reading the rest.
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  • From dawnangel on March 27, 2008
    ahh, poor Draca, and Sirius's naked glory. I do wonder though why he wouldn't like towels. Would it be because of the time he spent as a dog, and dogs don't like towels. or is it just one of those quirks. James is certainly a protective creature, and its nice to see some more of James' dragon attributes. I like the description of his back, and ridgeline. I wonder if that would be a very sensitive area, like an erogenous zone for him? Nice Job, I am looking forward to reading more of it.

    Dawnangel
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  • From dawnangel on March 22, 2008
    I loved the scene between Moody, and Draca. Made me crack up laughing, which hurts cause I just got my wisdom teeth out, but I need some laughs. Draca's little snit about the eyeball was just genius, i love it. You have a great story here. I love the dynamics you have going on between Snape and Tobias. Poor cats. I can't wait to see what other mischief they get in to at hogwarts. When do we get to see more Harry. i can't wait to read more, i really like this story.

    Dawnangel
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  • From dawnangel on March 19, 2008
    I am waiting to see what kind of backlash the future will have from this, and what of Harry's reaction to James. We haven't see much of Harry or Hermione yet. Is it because they are still out for the summer. That's it huh. Harry's not there yet is he? This is going to be interesting, are you going to try to hide who they are from Harry. that would be interesting. and how is harry going to take it. This is the summer before 5th year, before Sirius's death right. I am waiting to see how this all turns out, ooh, and there's the DA to think about to, and evil Umbridge.

    Can't wait to see what happens.
    -dawnangel
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  • From dawnangel on March 17, 2008
    what an interesting change of events. Can't wait for the next chapter. I love this story, keep it going.

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  • From dawnangel on March 12, 2008
    I am loving this story so far. especially the way you play with James' dragon bit. The part with his tail curling in orgasm well done. I don't know like what time you are going to send them into, but having them see their grandparents, and the rise of the dark lord would definelty be interesting. i also think that James' dragon DNA should be able to be passed on to his children, that would really though a loop in the system. How you would have to deal with like if the baby would be in the womb in like a whole story though. I really like your characters. great job. I will keep reading, if you keeping posting!
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  • From dawnangel on March 11, 2008
    YAAYYY. This makes me happy. I can't wait to read the rest of it, Thank you for posting it, It just felt like the story wasn't quite finished yet.
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