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By : yaoifanboy4ever
  • From ANON - Faery66 on April 30, 2013
    Please Please up date soon.

    Thank you

    =D
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  • From ANON - Diana on April 27, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - karrnras on July 04, 2011
    Wow, I love the poem you put up. Did you write it? If you did, It's grate (and you should think of putting it up on DeventArt.) Even if you didn't it's still good. I'm keeping the poem, just so you know. I won
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  • From kneeya on January 20, 2009
    Up-date up-date up-date x infinity!!!!! Sorry didn't mean to yell but do you think you could maybe possibly sorta up-date like soon maybe sooner. Thank you.
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  • From slashslut on October 03, 2008
    sick and twisted .. . and i like it! looking forward to the back story and what happens next!

    please add me to your email update list: pwfan626@aol.com.
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  • From CloudR on August 09, 2008
    Goddamnit hurry up with the next chapter already!! -pout-, i love this story, its morbidly hilarious, but com'on! feed your readers!
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  • From ANON - Winters Prologue on August 07, 2008
    YAY!!! I've been waiting for this new chapter for ages (and only just realised that it had gone up since ive been without a computer). To tell you the truth posting those poems (as good as they are) really irritated me some. Anyhow, I enjoyed this chapter, a little short though, try expanding things a little more and adding more detail, don't be afraid to write long chapters as long as they aint uber long. The first chapter was average length and included detail like I was saying but this one, as good as it was, was a little bit of a let down from the standard that you set yourself at in the first chapter (which was wonderful by the way, especially Bella's reaction to the murders). Anyway, keep smiling (and writing of course) and don't worry about how bad you think your writing is because once you improve length of chapters and detail included you will be well on your way to being one of my top fanfic writers. If you're really worried about how your writing is and don't have a beta to read over it then send me an email and i'd gladly help out. I'm on the computer every second day at least (usually every day) and could use something else to do.

    On a different note; are you able to email me when you update so that I know when the chapters have been posted? gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
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  • From CloudR on July 28, 2008
    damn right, you deserve to be flamed -sticks tongue out at you-, dont do it again. AWESOME CHAPTER!!!! hurry up with the next...
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  • From slashslut on July 19, 2008
    whoa, talk about dark! im always surprised that there aren't more fics where harry unleashes a can of whop ass on the dursleys. those are the most fun to read, imo and very catharic to write i would imagine. email me when you update: pwfan626@aol.com. read ya later!
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  • From Ladyroo88 on July 16, 2008
    Ekk! YOu finally posted again !! I am sooo excited!!! More please!!! I love insane bella!!!
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  • From Selera on July 16, 2008
    Nice.. very very gruesome but nice.. and at the same time no one will think Harry did the crime now.. that is evil.
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  • From kneeya on June 12, 2008
    So far so great! More please! I love dark Harry! Let's torture some Weasleys now, hehehehe...oh sorry, as I was saying, great story, more please. Thank you. The ramblings of a mad woman.

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  • From voldemortsgrl on June 11, 2008
    Are you going to update the actual story soon? I mean, the poems are interesting, but I have been waiting for the next chapter to be updated. I really do enjoy this story, thought I must say that the plot is a bit rushed. I'm not trying to flame you, I think you are a great author, but you could slow down the plot a bit or explain how things came about between Voldemort and Harry and why Harry decided to kills his 'family'. I think this story has a lot of promise, but I would like you to update the story, and not these poems. Please add the next chapter soon. I like how Bella was afraid of Harry, but then when she went to see what Harry did, she wasn't afraid anymore, and that doesn't make that much sense to me, but I will go with it if you explain it later on in the story.
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  • From LostPetunia on March 22, 2008
    I almost bypassed this story because of the grammatical errorsin the summary. I'm not going to lie- they irk me like no other. I'm glad I didn't though because it is a good piece. Are things deliberately un-capitalized or are you in need of a beta? If you are looking for a beta, keep me in mind (thelostpetunia@yahoo.com) because I'm torn, trully. I want to keep reading your story, but your grammar trips me up and annoys me so. Update soon, so I can see which side of my internal battle will win out.
    ~Unbloomed
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  • From voldemortsgrl on March 17, 2008
    more please...
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