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Reviews for Freeloader

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2008
    That is such a cute story. I really love it thank you so much for writing it.
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  • From enslavementthesis on March 16, 2008
    This has some great potential, it's funny, it's quite lighthearted, yet a little sombre.
    If you wanted, you could develop this and make it fantastic.
    There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, etc. If You do not already have a beta, she is more than willing to offer you her services.
    If you are interested, please email this girl at tattered_euphoria1939 (at) hotmail (dot) com
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  • From MisstressNicole on March 13, 2008
    It's apparent that you aren't a native speaker. You switch back and forth between tenses and incidentally it's annoying. The idea behind the story is alright. I'd suggest you work with a beta to make your work flow better. Also, how did Draco die? Why had he chosen Potter's house to haunt?

    Nikki
    MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
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  • From bananasforyou on March 13, 2008
    i like it but how did draco die?
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 12, 2008
    Might be just friendship but there's jealously there.
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