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By : Bastian
  • From applesaucensoysauce on March 17, 2008
    I like to read more...a bit hooked to know what happens next.
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  • From sanda on March 16, 2008
    nice story
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  • From kyoudragondeathduo on March 16, 2008
    I hope you update this soon it seems interesting and its really hard t find a well written werewolf fan fiction.
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  • From gckittylove on March 16, 2008
    absolutely love this!! can't wait to see how fenrir comes in!
    please update this soon- i'll be checking back daily!

    on myspace ---> gckittylove@yahoo.com
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  • From ProfessorSibly on March 16, 2008
    ^.^ LOVE IT!!! Update soon!
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  • From alma on March 15, 2008
    A very good start. I liked how Harry is being stubborn and not going with the flow. I also like the cross-dressing part of it, it shows the control over the submissives.
    It's very different and unique and I can't wait for an update!
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  • From Demonicone on March 15, 2008
    Awesome!! I love this story, submissive Harry is my fav. ^_^

    I can't wait to read more. Harry + skirt = XD
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on March 15, 2008
    I didn't like the idea fo Harry wearing the skirt either at first. But as I saw the interaction between him and the dominants, and even him and Remus, I began to see it differently. It adds a new dimension to everything and especially Harry. I like it. I like the way things are set up. I like that Severus is Harry's Alpha. I've never seen that before; I rarely see Severus as a werewolf and when he is it's definitely not as Alpha. I also like that Remus is submissive. I almost always make him dominant, just because I like a dominant Remus. But this is interesting. I love the Sirius/Remus relationship, as they're a favourite of mine. I love how annoyed Harry is by the rain, by being submissive, by Tom, by having to pick someone (although he really can't now because of Tom). I like the way you have things set up. It's different and new and I love it! Keep up the great work. ~dpa06~
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  • From dino1 on March 15, 2008
    I love the idea about the dresses and harry with a strong will. I hope that Fenrir comes into the picture soon to save harry from tom even if its a kidnapping. Please update soon.
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  • From Madhater on March 15, 2008
    hey this is a new idea and i love it i hope to see more its very interesting. ^_^
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  • From Extraho on March 15, 2008
    i really like this. stubborn harry is so cute. i suppose you dont have to be einstein to figure out that harry is going to have a hard time in this story, but i am BEGGING you for a happy ending. looking forward to future chapers.
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  • From darkFaerie161 on March 15, 2008
    more please!
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  • From Yoshisan on March 15, 2008
    i like it and can't wait for more. plus i lke your idea of cross dressing, mainly
    because i like harry in sexy, skimpy outfits. but with the way the story is how with sev go against voldie and hand harry over to fenrir, and still live?
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on March 15, 2008
    OK, I didn't expect to like this as much as I did, as completely AU stories are generally not my thing, but this one sounded rather awesome so I gave it a shot, and I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed this first chapter and I absolutely cannot wait for more!

    As you mentioned the 'cross-dressing' in the AN at the end, I felt I should give you my input on it. I can definitely picture it, and it's highly representative of the amount of power Harry has in this situation - pretty much none, as he is 'required' to wear this no matter what. He's the lower class of people almost, and HAS to comply.

    So I can't wait for an update and I hope that you update ASAP! I'm really enjoying this!
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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