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Reviews for Political Axes

By : Rettavex
  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 25, 2009
    @14. OH NO!!! Draco does not play...and he was already insecure about Max in the first place. I'm so glad that Harry turned Max down, but DAMN!! I hope they make up quick. I loved the interrogation foreplay with Emma and Harry. She is a bad motherf*cka : ) And wow, the back story with Avery, that was really well done, I do wonder who's managed to string all of these pieces together to try and hurt Harry. I hope they get exposed soon. Squee! I'm almost caught up and so excited about where this is going...off to read the next and only chapter left before you update again : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 24, 2009
    Ch. 13. OMG. This is like better than Mission Impossible. I love how kickass everyone is. The sexual tension and sparks between Charlie and Emma are HOT!! Drarry who? LOL. Now what's that all about? What's going on with Charlie, is there a larger subplot brewing? I love the way you craft new ideas/spells/places. This thing that happened to Syl sounds really deadly, and Harry knows what it is? And it involves Max. Uh Oh, I smell trouble! Excellent chapter...very exciting and I love Emma lots!
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 19, 2009
    Oh! Awesome chapter! I am dying for the rest of this story!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 18, 2009
    @Chapter 12. That was so intense! Damn Max. I'm so sad that he was able to get to Dray like that. I love how well Harry can read his lover. That scene where he figured out something was wrong was like jarring, I felt like I was in the moment with Draco. I love how selfless Draco is, and how much he's willing to give up for Harry but I'm SO glad Harry set him straight. They're declarations really are fiercely romantic and beautiful and it's even more hot because they're so masculine you know? : ) I just hope their love isn't put through too much now that they've decided to go all or nothing. I love this fic Rettavex. Your writing is so descriptive and really pulls me in to the room with these characters. Great job....OK, onto the next tomorrow :)
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  • From callistianstar on January 16, 2009
    Of course I want to see Chapter 16. ^^ This was a really good chapter. Of course, I should have caught on that Draco had not heard Max, since you said he whispered, and yes, it does make sense for anyone (be it Draco or many others in love) that senses would shut off. The scene following the last...that was absolutely wonderfully written. The pain, frustration...the love there was thrilling and gorgeous. I was so entranced, definitely by the moment that Harry yelled at Draco at last, saying that he was pushed. I was completely moved the moment Harry decided to confess.

    And then, back to the world outside...very exciting. To have a sane, professional, and powerful man to contend with. This is really getting interesting. Wonderful job with this chapter.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 15, 2009
    Sooo need chapter 16!!! Sounds like dangerous times are coming!!!
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  • From Inxie on January 14, 2009
    Did I mention that this story has my heart? Well it does!And Ah, the plot thickenss!!!! Very interesting
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 14, 2009
    That was an epic fight. Very well-written.
    Looks like Harry has his work cut out for him. ^^
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  • From christis on January 14, 2009
    oh my! this just gets better and better...you've got my blood up now...I can't wait for the next chapter...please update soon and keep up the Awesome work!
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  • From callistianstar on January 12, 2009
    Oh yes, definitely. Your scene with Emma and Charlie was indeed beautiful. I really enjoyed the descriptions and assessments of Emma in these past two chapters from both smitten Charlie's and professional Harry's points of view. You've introduced a really hard core (sane!) woman, and I think that is just wonderful. I held on to a cure for Syl for just a moment, so I'm sad to see him go, but I am content to have at least a lead on who his attackers were. That former event when Harry found out is still sticking in my mind as one of the most powerful scenes I've ever read. Max is all kinds of trouble so I'm glad that they've talked it out between the two of them, though if Draco did indeed arrive at the hug, he should have heard Max's words. I don't think I should be at all worried so I won't be, but I do hope that Draco understands quickly enough, though he does have a right to be insecure. Great job with these past two chapters.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 11, 2009
    @Ch. 11. Oh! This Dodd dude is bad news....he sounds sexy as hell though. LOL. YOu sure do write some sexy ass male characters. And dammit, my heart went out to Draco. He's so insecure right now, and for understandable reasons. I can't believe that he and Harry had a threesome with this dude. I hope Harry and Draco prove Dodd wrong, and that he's not going to do anything sinister to secure Harry's attention. It is sexy to see these incredible to see these two guys fighting for his attention. I love the original and intricate histories and characters you adding to the HP universe with this story. Really awesome and makes for so more richer tale. Excellent and riveting chapter.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 11, 2009
    Sooo need chapter 15!! Will Draco let Harry explain? Why does he get to be jealous?
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 10, 2009
    Aw, what a terrible place to stop. This is like torture...
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  • From ANON - Lady Jay on January 10, 2009
    First, let me say I'm so glad to see you'd picked back up with the fic. I was beginning to fear you'd given up on it and that would have been tragic, because it is truly one of the best pieces of fanfic I've come across on this site and others. Your characters are multifaceted, intriguing, beautifully crafted and described. I love the pulse and pace of the plotting and am so looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds. Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 09, 2009
    Damn! It's always that the jealous lover misunderstands the overheard conversation which leads to even bigger problems. Although, the make-up sex is will well worth it!
    Keep going!
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