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From callistianstar on September 25, 2009
I liked the blood spell there. That was intesting. Moreso, how ruthless and professional their squad can be. I look forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - Ariathel on July 20, 2009
Wow, amazingly good story... Please continue!
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From ANON - Jadehex on May 30, 2009
How cruel of you to leave it at a cliff hanger like that. I would like to know what happens next if you can manage to up date. Avery and Joesph and the Warlock all seriously have some Karma coming. If only for trying to make potentially bad situations a million times worse. The pure blood mania is going to be the fall of the the old core seriously. And Harry is not going to take the near loss or loss of another one of his team well.
And who knows what Charlie is going to do.

Please update?

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From Juana13 on May 18, 2009
NO!!
does that mean that charlie died!?!?
ack! thats horrible!
man, you've got me hooked on this story. its absolutely insane!!
so many problems between draco/harry, and you throw in this case, the fact that now two of his team members just might be dead, and that the ministry along with the entire wizarding world is being corrupted...!
i cant imagine how hard it must be for emma now...
charlie's death could really screw up things now, for both emma and harry and ron...
as you can easily see, you've gotten me 100% interested in this fic.
i wait for your next update, which i hope will be soon so that charlie's death might be confirmed.
looking forward to it already!
cant wait!! : )
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From ANON - SP777 on May 17, 2009
about #21...

*looks at authoress incredulously*
Yeah, your ''behind'' BETTER run!!!
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Okay, this sentence gave me pause & a eyebrow raise...

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From ANON - SP777 on May 16, 2009
the story thus far...

I'll be the first to admit I avoided this story like the plague, simply
because of the fact I've gotten tired of the EXTREME angst, i.e. abuse,
rape, tortures, helplessness, etc. ...that had been dominating this
section.

If I want to submit myself to that, I'll watch the news.

BUT, I gave this a shot and I admit I like what I'm seeing, this is truly
intriguing but I am reviewing at chap. 4, haven't got far into it yet.

Anyway, I like this idea of how Harry & Draco's relationship started, I like how
Harry is looked at as an ADULT & a force to be reckoned with, not as a silly,
simpering child AND I like the fact how you write/look at Harry & Draco as
young MEN, not boys. Some authors forget that as YEARS go by, you DO have
a tendency to grow up.

You keep writing like this and you'll have a reader who'll follow you for
months to come.

Potential Faithful Reviewer/Reader,

SP777
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From SoftObsidian74 on May 16, 2009
OMG...OMG>...OMG!!!!

what have you done?????

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Please no....please....

Brilliant fight scene, and excellent build up of suspense, how you managed to work in a hot as FUCK sex scene admist all of that I do not know but WELL DONE....still mad at you...please don't kill Charles....he and Emma need each other. She really deserves some loving...come on!!!

I HATE Avery so much right now....Update SOON!
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From Inxie on May 14, 2009
AWWWWW dang! I hate cliffy's but its all good! Btw Charlie and Em are too cute (in a forceful combat type of way) Can't wait till the next chapterrrr
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From tiapotter18 on May 14, 2009
aw, c'mon! cliffhangers r awful, n yet u force one upon your readers. *sigh* guess its the price of bein an avid fan...can't wait for the update :D

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From thrnbrooke on May 14, 2009
NO!!! Why didn't Charlie go with her? I sooooo need chapter 21!!!
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From ANON - Kat on May 08, 2009
Yay for updates! I love this story!
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From Inxie on May 05, 2009
Pftt..Harry's such a frickkin bad ass! loveee it. And now we move on further to catch Avery! Yay!!! R we still interested in fic?!?!? R U SERIOUS??? I'm ALL about this story right now and my heart flutters when I see an update...not even joking you. See more soon?
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From thrnbrooke on May 05, 2009
Soooo need chapter 20!!! Holy smoke!
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From SoftObsidian74 on May 04, 2009
GReat update. Yes, we're still interested in the story. Please don't let lack of review dissuade you from continuing. It's not really fair to the people who have been with you on this exciting journey. Not all your readers review, but there are many fans of this story, I being one of them. Lag between updates is understandable. Totally abandoning this story is not : D What a compelling chapter. I love what Charlie did, and WOW wow wow at what happened to Hermione and Neville. I can totally see both situations. That was quite unexpected and gives everything a different dark tone. Poor Em, I'm sure she's conflicted...and Charlies is gonna get a earful. Harry is really in a tough spot. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Update soon : )
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From ANON - serilla on May 04, 2009
Continue please I'm still interested - have been from the beginning (OK may be a bit slack on the reviews but don't stop) - so please keep on writing. :)
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