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Reviews for The Weaving

By : Jmedea
  • From ANON - nastygrl on March 18, 2008
    Wow! This is so good! Loved the last scene, very intense. Great descriptions, my heart was pounding! With the second chapter, my heart was pounding even more! Can't wait to read the third one. Are you sure there will be only three chapters? I can see a great story in there.
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  • From MaraudingLady on March 18, 2008
    :O Wow..just wow. The spell that Hermione had cast in the first chapter was very sensual and intriguing in itself, but the way you wrote the second chapter was just phenomenal!! The language the way he grabs her and gaaaa that was just brilliant! Pleasepleaseplease update soon this is amazing stuff!
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on March 18, 2008
    this story is so different. i've never read anything like it! i love it! please update soon!
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  • From neelix on March 18, 2008
    Very nice. I love that there was no questioning on either part 'I'm a Professor / I'm a Stdent - it shouldn't happen' - gets a bit tedious cos you so know they will be at it at some point. Way to go for getting them there quickly! Loving this, hope there's more to , ahem, come.... lol
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  • From Darkwolf01 on March 18, 2008
    I like your second chapter. I thought at first it was going a bit fast, but then i read your note at the end and realised your intention was to have a 3 chapter piece, so cudos to you for making a good transition for only a 3 chapter piece. I hope you will elaborate more on the effects of the spell between Hermione and Severus, since you translated what she had said when she cast the spell. I assume from that translation, that she would feel what he felt....? And if she did, did she feel what Severus went through when he was being beaten?

    Do continue, it's quite good.

    Wolfsoul
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 18, 2008
    Excellent. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From Angie30 on March 18, 2008
    Wow, that was a pleasant surprise. :)
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  • From SavineSnape on March 18, 2008
    Wow... what was that she made... and the second chapter is sooo hot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Laura on March 18, 2008
    Lovely! Very original and well-written. I hope you give us more details on what exactly Hermione has done. Has she joined their souls? Given him some of her magic? Whatever, I love it. More, please. LK
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  • From Mmoirai on March 17, 2008
    Well, I am intrigued. I would like to read more of this. Where are you taking it?
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  • From honeybee on March 17, 2008
    I love it so far, it starts very good! I'm dying to know what it that spell...
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  • From wudelfin on March 16, 2008
    oh what a begining!!!
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  • From ANON - Jane on March 16, 2008
    It is fabulous!! More More More!!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on March 16, 2008
    Wow! That was a great start! I cannot wait for more. Keep up the good work and update when you can.
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