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By : necroPHILIACSxANONymous
  • From yaoified on March 17, 2008
    first... this was very well written

    second... there should be a 'chan' or 'shouta' warning somewhere...

    also... 11 is too young of an age to respond to sexual stimulation with an orgasm. while girls can reach puberty as young as 8, boys tend to reach puberty a bit later in life - not sayng it couldn't happen, but mostly a boy starts puberty around 13 and it ends around 17-18.
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  • From Alpacamom on March 17, 2008
    You should have put 'chan' in the warnings. I don't like to read chan, and would have appreciated a heads up. I kept thinking, 'any minute now, we're going to find out that they're 2 adult teachers acting out a fantasy'. No such luck, unfortunately.
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  • From janeJumped on March 16, 2008
    There is a difference between minor and pedophilia. that was kinda sick.
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  • From SamGORE on March 16, 2008
    This is a whole new side to Harry Potter.
    :D
    It's Harry Potter made sexy!
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  • From lucindamcwilliams on March 16, 2008
    thank you for the story .you got me whating more is there a chapter 2 or something.if so e-mail me .i like to read but cant spell at all.but how needs to spell wen i can read.
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